I will test, edit, review your game design, provide criticism and guidance


About this gig
Creating meaningful content, which is relevant to nowadays is a daunting challenge. Industries such as painting, music and story writing had hundreds of years to grow into what they are today. In comparison, video games are merely children of these ancient forms of art.
Nevertheless, gaming swiftly rises to the top and provides multiple opportunities to inspire people, enjoy the life and share wisdom. Just as Vincent van Gogh's "The Scream" or Queen's "Bohemian Rhapsody", modern gaming becomes another way to pass on the knowledge, the cultural vibe, which seed has just recently sprouted.
In this gig I can review your content and provide acute criticism, which will hopefully assist you in improving the potential weakpoints of your game-to-be.
- Starting from "Standard" package, I offer advice of what more can be done (adding missing story elements such as hook, exciting middle, memorable ending / character archetypes, matching visuals and sounds, connecting worldbuilding).
- Above "Premium" package I have enough space to share my knowledge accumulated as a game writer here on Fiverr. I can brainstorm new story details, evoking creatures, addition of consequences and a dynamic world.
Get to know Eddy P.
Stories are mirrors and there is no home without a mirror
- FromLithuania
- Member sinceDec 2019
- Last delivery7 months
Languages
English, Lithuanian, German
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FAQ
What if my content is larger in size than required or I can't afford the higher package?
Please contact me personally for any content that does not fit the package's requirements or if you wish to go with a smaller package. Generally, a reading fee of 10$ / additional 15 pages is applied for anything exceeding the limits. Keep in mind that only the text counts (500 words / page)!
How the offered advice will be relevant to my game?
Whenever I advise, I try my best to ensure the general flow of the game without losing the original intention of the developer. The result is a new perspective upon the content, which still remains relevant to the developer but also can become more enticing for the chosen target audience.
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Ongoing collaborationAmazing person and even kinder soul
$100-$200
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2 weeks
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Helpful?W williamjacob460

United States
Ongoing collaborationAwesome critiques which helped me move the project further. It was amazing experience for someone writing a story for the first time
$100-$200
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- Service as described
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W williamjacob460

United States
Ongoing collaborationAmazing person and even kinder soul
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?W williamjacob460

United States
Ongoing collaborationAwesome critiques which helped me move the project further. It was amazing experience for someone writing a story for the first time
$100-$200
Price
Helpful?
