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I will audit, rewrite, and optimize your youtube video scripts for retention
About this Gig
A great topic will still fail if your script loses the audience in the first 30 seconds. If your views are dropping off early or your click-through rate isn't converting into watch time, your script structure needs an audit.
I will review, redline, and optimize your existing YouTube video script to maximize viewer retention and audience engagement.
What this audit covers:
- Hook Overhaul: Rewriting your opening 1530 seconds with 23 high-converting hook alternatives.
- Pacing & Drop-Off Prevention: Eliminating fluff, repetitive points, and awkward transitions that cause viewers to click away.
- Tone & Voice Enhancement: Removing robotic/AI phrasing and refining the dialogue so it sounds natural when spoken on camera.
- Visual & B-Roll Cue Suggestions: Adding bracketed visual notes to tell your editor when to cut to graphics, text overlays, or B-roll.
Send over your draft or transcript, and lets fix your retention before you hit record!
Language:
English
Content type:
Generic
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Film/TV scripts
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
How do I provide my script to you?
You can attach a Google Doc link, Microsoft Word file, plain text file, or paste your draft directly into the order requirements page.
Can you audit AI-generated scripts (e.g., ChatGPT drafts)?
Yes. In fact, raw AI scripts heavily suffer from flat pacing, robotic phrasing, and weak hooks. I act as your human-in-the-loop editor to turn flat AI drafts into engaging, human-sounding video scripts.
What if my script is longer than 3,000 words?
If you have a video essay or long-form documentary script that exceeds 3,000 words, send me a message with your word count and I will provide a custom quote.
