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I will developmental edit your romance, romantasy or fantasy novel
Fiction beta reader developmental editor
Hi, Babs a beta reader and editor specializing in romance, dark romance, and romantasy.
I read like your target reader, not a checklist: I tell you exactly where I got hooked, where I got bored, and w...
About this Gig
Our manuscript has good bones, but is the structure actually holding it up? A developmental edit is where we find out, before an agent or reader does it for you.
I'm Babs. I developmental edit romance, dark romance, romantasy, fantasy, thriller, and memoir manuscripts, going beyond a beta read to address structure, pacing, character arcs, and reader engagement.
Your editorial letter covers:
- Overview & first impressions
- Storyline, plot & structure
- Pacing & scene effectiveness
- Character development & arcs
- Dialogue, voice & narrative style
- Setting & worldbuilding
- A clear, prioritized action plan
Plus in-line comments throughout, flagging where tension rises, where it sags, and where inconsistencies need fixing, so you're never guessing what a note means.
Best for writers preparing to query agents or self-publish who want their manuscript structurally sound before it goes further.
How it works:
- Message me your word count and genre first
- I'd confirm the scope and send a custom quote
- You receive your editorial letter + in-line notes by your delivery date.
Honest, detailed, never sugar-coated but always on your story's side. Message me to get started.
Language:
Dutch
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English
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German
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Italian
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Spanish
Genre:
Horror/ thriller
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Mystery
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Romance
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Audience :
General readers
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Children
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Teen / young adult
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Adult
POV:
Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What's the difference between this and beta reading?
Beta reading gives you reader-reaction feedback, where I got hooked, bored, or confused. A developmental edit goes further: a full editorial letter plus in-line comments covering structure, pacing, character arcs, and craft-level fixes, not just reactions.
What genres do you edit?
Romance, dark romance, romantasy, fantasy, thriller, and memoir. If your manuscript falls outside these, message me with your genre first and I'll tell you honestly whether it's a good fit.
What do I actually receive?
A full editorial letter covering plot, structure, pacing, character, dialogue, voice, and worldbuilding, plus a prioritized action plan and in-line comments throughout your manuscript pages.
How is pricing worked out?
Developmental edits are priced by word count and scope, so message me first with your genre and word count and I'll send a custom quote before you order.
Do you use AI in your edits?
No. Every note, comment, and editorial letter is written by me, reading your manuscript myself from start to finish.
