I will review your tabletop roleplaying game

As a game developer with more than five years of experience I understand that you want to get some constructive feedback on your game. You want more than just a friend saying "That sounds cool!" You want to know if your game idea is solid before you commit time to developing it.

I will give you feedback on your premise, giving you points to consider to create a two page marketing plan for your game.

I can also go over the mechanics, putting them through a playthrough, to see where they are solid, where they fall apart, and giving feedback on how to make them stronger.

If you have a completed game I will read over the entire manuscript and give feedback. This is a high level read giving constructive criticism on the game as a whole, pointing out where there are gaps or confusion and marking those places that need work.