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I will beta read your romance book with detailed feedback
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Hello! My name is Raphiana Olivia. I’m a passionate reader and dedicated story editor with a strong background in English and fiction writing. I specialize in sci-fi, fantasy, and character-driven sto...
About this Gig
HELLO
I will professionally beta read your romance book and provide honest, detailed feedback to help improve your story before publishing. Whether your novel is contemporary, dark, fantasy, paranormal, mafia, or enemies to lovers romance, I will review it from a real readers perspective and highlight what works and what needs improvement.
You will receive feedback on pacing, plot flow, character chemistry, emotional impact, dialogue, tension, and reader engagement. I will also point out confusing scenes, repetitive sections, weak areas, and moments that need stronger development using clear and constructive language.
Perfect for self-published authors, Wattpad writers, Kindle/KDP authors, and writers preparing for editing or release. Please send your manuscript in PDF, DOC, or DOCX format along with your word count and any specific concerns.
What Youll Receive
- Honest and detailed reader feedback
- Character analysis and relationship dynamics
- Pacing and plot review
- Emotional impact and reader engagement feedback
- Areas that feel confusing, repetitive, or slow
- Notes on dialogue, chemistry, and tension
- Suggestions for improvement using clear, simple language
Language:
English
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German
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What is included in your gig?
What is included in your gig? Every reader report covers a range of topics, including: Plot, Pacing, World Building, Characterisation and Character Development, Impact of Key Relationships, and Problems Discovered. As well as including In-Line Comments, and Chapter by Chapter Reports. My average is
Do you use AI?
Nope. I use absolutely zero AI. All words, thoughts and comments are completely my own. Always.
What makes you different?
Every report receives my complete focus and I like to tailor the report to every individual's needs. Plot holes and inconsistencies are my speciality, my brain locks onto the details! I'm a firm believer in giving authors the tools for success, because every book deserves to be read and truly loved.
Do you have any triggers?
No, I'm happy to read pretty much anything and everything.
My genre isn't listed, what can I do?
I read most genres, if yours is not included then just message me and ask. I'm happy to read the majority of genres but I have a special interest in Romance, Fantasy, Sci-fi and Thriller!
