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I will critique your first chapter and provide honest feedback
Beta Reader for Fiction Authors
Hi! I'm Joana, an avid reader and passionate beta reader from Portugal. I love helping authors strengthen their stories through honest, thoughtful, and constructive feedback. I focus on plot, pacing, ...
About this Gig
Welcome!
Your first chapter is the most important part of your book. It's where readers decide whether to keep turning the pages or stop reading.
As a passionate beta reader, I will carefully read your opening chapter and provide honest, constructive, and detail feedback on:
- The strength of your opening hook;
- Plot and pacing;
- Character introduction and development;
- Dialogue;
- Writing style and readability;
- Reader engagement;
- Areas that need improvement.
You'll receive thoughtful feedback designed to help you strengthen your first chapter while keeping your unique voice as a writer.
I read fiction in English and Portuguese and always provide respectful, actionable suggestions.
Let's make your first chapter impossible to put down!
Language:
English
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Portuguese
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What will you review in my first chapter?
I'll provide detailed feedback on your opening hook, pacing, plot, character introductions, dialogue, writing style, and overall reader engagement. My goal is to help you make a strong first impression.
Do you edit grammar or proofread?
No. This is a critique service, not proofreading or copyediting. I'll point out recurring language issues when they affect readability, but my focus is on the quality of your story and opening chapter.
Wich genres do you read?
I read most fiction genres, including Fantasy, Romance, Mystery, Thriller, Science Fiction, Literary Fiction, and Young Adult. If you're unsure whether your manuscript is a good fit, feel free to message me before ordering.
What languages do you accept?
I provide feedback on manuscripts written in English and Portuguese.
Can I send more than one chapter?
Yes, as long as it fits within the word limit of the package you choose. For longer manuscripts, please check out my full beta reading Gig or contact me for a custom offer.
