I will beta read your manuscript for tension, twists and plot

5.0
5.0

New Zealand

I speak English

1 order completed

Book reviewer, Beta Reader

Hi, I'm Alyse! leeseyreviews.com I am a passionate book reviewer and dedicated beta reader specialising exclusively in Thrillers and Romance. As a reader with dyslexia, my brain is uniquely wired to...
About this Gig

Are you wondering if your plot twist actually shocks the reader? Or if your characters have the kind of chemistry that keeps pages turning? Lets find out together!


As an avid book reviewer and a passionate fan of Thrillers and Romance, I know exactly what readers are looking for in a great story.

Because I am dyslexic, my brain is uniquely wired to ignore the typos and look at the big picture. I dont get bogged down by semicolons; instead, I focus 100% on story mechanics, pacing, logic gaps, and emotional beats.

What I focus on for your manuscript:


  • The Hook: Does your opening chapter grab the reader?
  • Pacing & Tension: Does the story drag in the middle, or keep up the momentum?
  • Plot & Twists: Did I see the ending coming, or did you genuinely surprise me?
  • Character Arcs: Are your characters relatable?


What you will receive: A detailed, structured Reader Report breaking down my honest thoughts, constructive criticism, and real-time emotional reactions to your book.


️ PLEASE NOTE: This is a story-focused beta read. I do not provide proofreading, line editing, or grammar corrections. My goal is to help you polish your plot.

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

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Mystery

Language:

English

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    Requested quick turnaround on the effectiveness of the "hook" of early chapters of a fiction manuscript. The report covered several aspects--pacing, character development, point of view--with several suggestions as well.

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    marta_tan

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    United States

    5

    Requested quick turnaround on the effectiveness of the "hook" of early chapters of a fiction manuscript. The report covered several aspects--pacing, character development, point of view--with several suggestions as well.

    $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No