I will edit your short story to tighten pacing and sharpen voice
Gig Summary
It takes a village to raise a story
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Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
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About this Gig
This service offers a substantive edit of your short story, focused not just on language but on the architecture of the piece. I approach fiction as a working writer and editor with a critical background, not as a cheerleader or a hobbyist. If you're looking for a line-by-line close reading from someone who understands form, style, and narrative mechanics, this is it.
The process is straightforward. I read the work carefully. I mark what's working and where the structure breaks. I cut what's repetitive, flag what's vague, and question what feels underdeveloped. If your dialogue meanders, your tension dissolves, or your point of view drifts, I'll note it. If a sentence is sharp, I'll say so. If it isn't, I won't pretend it is.
This is for short fiction. Literary or genre doesn't matter to me; what matters is whether you're serious about the work.
Deliverables include:
- A marked-up manuscript (via Track Changes or Google Docs)
- Optional editors letter outlining major issues and possible approaches
- Focus on clarity, structure, pacing, voice, and sentence craft
Let's get started.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Why hire a human editor instead of using AI?
AI can be useful for brainstorming and catching some basic errors, but it still struggles with nuance, voice, pacing, consistency, and context. A human editor understands what you're trying to accomplish and provides feedback tailored to your unique manuscript. AI just isn’t fully there yet.
Do you change my writing style?
No. I work with your voice, not against it. If something’s overwritten or unclear, I’ll show you how to fix it without flattening your tone.
What genres do you work with?
Most. Literary, speculative, slipstream, light horror, realism, romance. If it’s a story trying to do something true—even if it’s weird—I’m interested.
Do you help with dialogue or pacing?
Yes. I’ll give notes on how dialogue flows, where pacing slows, and whether your beats are hitting hard enough.
Can I send a longer piece?
Yes, but we’ll need to talk first. If it’s longer than 7,000 words, we might be looking at a novella here. We can do a custom gig for those.
How do you deliver edits?
I typically provide edits using Microsoft Word's Track Changes feature, which allows you to review every suggestion individually. If you would like to use a different format, please contact me before ordering. I am happy to discuss alternative options when possible.
Are you fluent in English?
Yes. English is my native language, and it is the only language I speak professionally. I was born and educated in the United States and hold an MFA in Creative Writing. My academic training and editing experience allow me to provide clear, accurate, and professional feedback on your work.
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summer50000

United States
Ongoing collaborationLibby is extremely perceptive and understands the intent of the author. Her feedback is constructive and specific and keeps you writing in a positive way. The most important thing a reviewer can do is to help you find gaps in the manuscript and guide you gently on how to fix them. This is Libby's specialty. I highly recommend Libby as a reviewer.
$50
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2 days
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Helpful?G georgeinlimbo

United States
I'm very happy to have received feedback from Libby. You can tell she really tried to understand the story and provide meaningful feedback. I'm looking forward to making revisions and will be leaning heavily on Libby's insights. It is exactly the kind of feedback I need to improve.
$50-$100
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4 days
Duration
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ericjohnson310

Canada
Ongoing collaborationLibby always does a great job.
$50
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6 days
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Helpful?E 
ericjohnson310

Canada
Ongoing collaborationLibby always does a fantastic job. I'll continue to work with her.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?S 
summer50000

United States
Ongoing collaborationLibby is an outstanding fiction reviewer. She provided timely, thoughful feedback on my manuscript. The comments she raised were perceptive and fair. She understood my intent as an author. I highly recommend Libby to anyone wanting deep and constuctive feedback.
$50-$100
Price
1 day
Duration
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summer50000

United States
Ongoing collaborationLibby is extremely perceptive and understands the intent of the author. Her feedback is constructive and specific and keeps you writing in a positive way. The most important thing a reviewer can do is to help you find gaps in the manuscript and guide you gently on how to fix them. This is Libby's specialty. I highly recommend Libby as a reviewer.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?G georgeinlimbo

United States
I'm very happy to have received feedback from Libby. You can tell she really tried to understand the story and provide meaningful feedback. I'm looking forward to making revisions and will be leaning heavily on Libby's insights. It is exactly the kind of feedback I need to improve.
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?E 
ericjohnson310

Canada
Ongoing collaborationLibby always does a great job.
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?E 
ericjohnson310

Canada
Ongoing collaborationLibby always does a fantastic job. I'll continue to work with her.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?S 
summer50000

United States
Ongoing collaborationLibby is an outstanding fiction reviewer. She provided timely, thoughful feedback on my manuscript. The comments she raised were perceptive and fair. She understood my intent as an author. I highly recommend Libby to anyone wanting deep and constuctive feedback.
$50-$100
Price
1 day
Duration
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