I will edit your short story to tighten pacing and sharpen voice

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

39 orders completed

It takes a village to raise a story

With an MFA in Creative Writing and 20 years of experience, I help writers refine ideas, craft compelling stories, and navigate the publishing world. Whether you need manuscript critiques, personalize...

Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

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Known for exceptionally quick replies

About this Gig

This service offers a substantive edit of your short story, focused not just on language but on the architecture of the piece. I approach fiction as a working writer and editor with a critical background, not as a cheerleader or a hobbyist. If you're looking for a line-by-line close reading from someone who understands form, style, and narrative mechanics, this is it.


The process is straightforward. I read the work carefully. I mark what's working and where the structure breaks. I cut what's repetitive, flag what's vague, and question what feels underdeveloped. If your dialogue meanders, your tension dissolves, or your point of view drifts, I'll note it. If a sentence is sharp, I'll say so. If it isn't, I won't pretend it is.


This is for short fiction. Literary or genre doesn't matter to me; what matters is whether you're serious about the work.


Deliverables include:


  • A marked-up manuscript (via Track Changes or Google Docs)
  • Optional editors letter outlining major issues and possible approaches
  • Focus on clarity, structure, pacing, voice, and sentence craft


Let's get started.

Language:

English

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Fanfiction

History

Horror/ thriller

Audience :

General readers

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Third person limited

Third person omniscient

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Narrative

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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    ericjohnson310

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    Canada

    5

    Libby always does a great job.

    Up to $50

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

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    ericjohnson310

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Libby always does a fantastic job. I'll continue to work with her.

    Up to $50

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    2 days

    Duration

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    summer50000

    US

    United States

    5

    Libby is an outstanding fiction reviewer. She provided timely, thoughful feedback on my manuscript. The comments she raised were perceptive and fair. She understood my intent as an author. I highly recommend Libby to anyone wanting deep and constuctive feedback.

    $50-$100

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

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    matthewchamb889

    US

    United States

    5

    Libby did a wonderful job going over my story and was great to work with. She gave honest feedback that helped me better understand how to develop my story and improve my craft. It was a pleasure working with her.

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

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    naomi1960

    US

    United States

    5

    Libby goes beyond editing and offers deeper insight into characters, their inconsistencies in actions and dialogue. She helps bring these to light so they can be corrected. Very thorough in that area, as well as offering feedback on word choice, theme, and plot. She even gave advice on marketing the manuscript. Libby is a super editor.

    $50-$100

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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Reviews

10 reviews for this Gig
5.0

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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
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Most relevant
  • E
    image-docs

    ericjohnson310

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Libby always does a great job.

    Up to $50

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E
    image-docs

    ericjohnson310

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Libby always does a fantastic job. I'll continue to work with her.

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    summer50000

    US

    United States

    5

    Libby is an outstanding fiction reviewer. She provided timely, thoughful feedback on my manuscript. The comments she raised were perceptive and fair. She understood my intent as an author. I highly recommend Libby to anyone wanting deep and constuctive feedback.

    $50-$100

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    matthewchamb889

    US

    United States

    5

    Libby did a wonderful job going over my story and was great to work with. She gave honest feedback that helped me better understand how to develop my story and improve my craft. It was a pleasure working with her.

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • N

    naomi1960

    US

    United States

    5

    Libby goes beyond editing and offers deeper insight into characters, their inconsistencies in actions and dialogue. She helps bring these to light so they can be corrected. Very thorough in that area, as well as offering feedback on word choice, theme, and plot. She even gave advice on marketing the manuscript. Libby is a super editor.

    $50-$100

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No