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I will line edit your fiction novel
Editor, Beta and Sensitivity Reader, Game Narrative Designer, and Ghostwriter
Storytelling has been my passion for over 20 years. I bring that love of the game, a sense of humor, and professionalism to every project, whether writing, editing, or reading!
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
About this Gig
Ready to polish that manuscript? I want to help you bring out your strengths as a writer! I do that by honing in on what makes your voice unique and trimming the rest.
This includes:
- Sentence structure/impact.
- Tone consistency
- Character voice
- Narrative voice
- Anachronistic wording in genre fiction
A: BEFORE
The axe landed again, the sound both violent and dull at once. Leon rounded the cottage, finding himself following a thick grey plume of smoke that trailed in a ribbon up through the trees. A yard from its base stood Raphael, turned away, facing a large stump. His shirt and vest lay carefully folded to the side, the pale skin of his back glistening with sweat. Leon halted, swallowing thickly.
B: AFTER
The axe landed again, the sound dull and violent at once. Leon rounded the cottage, guided by a ribbon of grey smoke trailing above the trees. A yard from its base stood Raphael facing a wide stump. The pale skin of his back glistened with sweat, shirt and vest discarded in a neat pile. Leon halted, throat tight as he swallowed.
Language:
English
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