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I will reveal plot holes with professional fiction beta reading and manuscript feedback
Beta Reader and Book Editor
Hi, I’m Thomas, a professional beta reader helping fiction authors strengthen their manuscripts through honest, detailed, and constructive feedback.
I don’t just say if I enjoyed your story. I read ...
About this Gig
Find the Story Problems Before Your Readers Do
Your manuscript deserves honest, professional, and constructive feedback before publication. I specialize in helping fantasy, romance, thriller, and sci-fi authors identify hidden weaknesses that can hurt reader engagement.
As an experienced beta reader, I provide thoughtful insights that help transform good stories into unforgettable books. My feedback is honest, detailed, and always focused on helping you improvenot discouraging your creativity.
Whether you're preparing for self-publishing, querying literary agents, or sending your book to editors, I'll help you strengthen your manuscript with actionable recommendations.
What You'll Receive:
- Honest reader feedback
- Plot hole detection
- Pacing analysis
- Character development review
- Dialogue evaluation
- Emotional impact assessment
- World-building feedback
- Story consistency check
- Strengths and weaknesses report
- Clear suggestions for improvement
Your story is unique, and it deserves personalized attention.
I don't use automated software or generic templates. Every manuscript is carefully read, analyzed, and reviewed from the perspective of both a passionate reader and a critical editor
Language:
English
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Welsh
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you edit grammar and spelling?
My primary service is beta reading and manuscript critique. I focus on story quality, plot, pacing, characters, and reader experience rather than line editing.
Which genres do you accept?
I specialize in: Fantasy, Romance, Thriller, Science Fiction
Will my manuscript remain confidential?
Absolutely. Your manuscript is kept completely private and will never be shared.
Can I send unfinished manuscripts?
Yes. Drafts, works in progress, and completed manuscripts are all welcome.
What format should I send?
Microsoft Word (.docx), PDF, or Google Docs.
Will I receive actionable suggestions?
Yes. My goal is to provide constructive feedback with practical recommendations you can implement.
Do you work with first time authors?
Yes. I enjoy helping both new and experienced authors improve their manuscripts.
Can you review a series?
Yes. Please contact me first for custom pricing on multiple books.
