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I will tell you what readers actually think of your novel
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One bed trope or a warrior finding themselves I'm your girl through it all
Reading books, amazing books is my passion. You can always find me with a good book in hand. Ever since Harry Potter and A Court of Thorns & Roses, I’ve been sucked into the fantasy world and I’ve nev...
About this Gig
As an aspiring author and someone who knows how difficult it is to figure it what the story is missing, I will provide keen insights and creative suggestions to help your story reach its maximum potential.
My feedback will include:
- Was your story intriguing from the very beginning? If not, then why?
- Were some parts of your story confusing? And why?
- How was the main plot?
- Was there a point where the story felt dragged? If yes, how should you improve it
- How were the characters: their backstories, their character development?
- Did the conversation and dialogues pull me in or were they lackluster?
- Was the ending satisfying?
- Should you include or remove something?
- Does the writing style need some adjustment?
I will use the comment and track changes feature of MS Word to convey my edits and all the corrections that I make.
Preferences: All fantasy (romance, urban, historical), all types of romance novels, maybe some thrillers.
Please contact before ordering! Lets make your story great!
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English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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eduardopresa
Mexico
Well, it was worth the wait! Rida has supplied me with a wealth of keen observations about the story, especially the characters. Now, thanks to her, I have a ton of rewriting to do. But it will do a great deal to make the story better. Thanks a lot, Rida!
Up to $50
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K 
katieschoumaker
United States
I absolutely LOVE working with Rida! She's a phenomenal beta reader in every way, and I truly appreciate her honesty, kindness, and eloquence more than I can say. I will definitely work with her again in the future (I think this is my 3rd order with her now!), and I very highly recommend her services!
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?E eduardopresa
Mexico
Thanks again, Rida, for taking the time to read my first mystery novel. I consider it a home run that I kept you guessing until the very end with all the last-minute twists. I'm glad you were very clear about what worked for you and what left you confused or wanting more. I made the pertinent corrections...
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?E eduardopresa
Mexico
Rida did another excellent job. Her comments and real-time reactions are priceless. She's obviously a very logical person, and her reasoning and predictions are spot on. Thank you!
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Price
7 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?E eduardopresa
Mexico
Rida is such an observant and intelligent beta reader, no manuscript should go without receiving her feedback. Great comments and suggestions! She really pays attention to every detail. Excellent job!
Up to $50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
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24 reviews for this Gig
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E eduardopresa
Mexico
Well, it was worth the wait! Rida has supplied me with a wealth of keen observations about the story, especially the characters. Now, thanks to her, I have a ton of rewriting to do. But it will do a great deal to make the story better. Thanks a lot, Rida!
Up to $50
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K katieschoumaker
United States
I absolutely LOVE working with Rida! She's a phenomenal beta reader in every way, and I truly appreciate her honesty, kindness, and eloquence more than I can say. I will definitely work with her again in the future (I think this is my 3rd order with her now!), and I very highly recommend her services!
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?E eduardopresa
Mexico
Thanks again, Rida, for taking the time to read my first mystery novel. I consider it a home run that I kept you guessing until the very end with all the last-minute twists. I'm glad you were very clear about what worked for you and what left you confused or wanting more. I made the pertinent corrections...
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?E eduardopresa
Mexico
Rida did another excellent job. Her comments and real-time reactions are priceless. She's obviously a very logical person, and her reasoning and predictions are spot on. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
R Seller's Response
Helpful?E eduardopresa
Mexico
Rida is such an observant and intelligent beta reader, no manuscript should go without receiving her feedback. Great comments and suggestions! She really pays attention to every detail. Excellent job!
Up to $50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
R Seller's Response
Helpful?
