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I will audit your landing page for higher conversions
Direct Response copywriter, convert readers into buyers!
Hi, I’m Rizal
I write direct response copy for people who are building something meaningful (startup founders, coaches, creators, and solopreneurs) who need words that don’t just sound nice… but actu...
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About this Gig
Is this you?
- Your ads are generating clicks but not leads or sales?
- Ideal customers are visiting your landing page but rarely converted into customers?
- You know that your product is awesome, but it seems like customers just don't get it?
Not sure what to do improve the results?
...You're in the right place.
I'll help you dive deep into your copy to uncover why it's not converting, what to do, and how to to boost results.
Here's what you get:
- A line-by-line analysis of your entire copy using proven direct-response copywriting frameworks.
- A detailed 500-700 word report pinpointing your biggest conversion killers (weak headlines, unclear CTAs, off-target messaging, etc.)
- Specific fixes with examples, ideas, as well as the copywriting and consumer psychology principles behind each recommendation.
Stuck on implementing changes? Message me, and I'll guide you!
Every visitor who doesn't convert costs you what? $50? $100? $500? Or more?
How much longer can you afford mediocre copy?
Let me help you fix your copy and skyrocket conversions.
Purpose:
Lead Generation
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Sales Conversion
Website type:
Portfolio/Personal
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SaaS/Product
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Landing Pages
Industry /Niche:
Technology
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Finance
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B2B
Clients I’ve worked with
Lewlock
Security Services
Helped Lewlock write a cold email to introduce their products to potential customers that don’t know the brand yet.
Sep 2022
DOWell
Mental Health Care
I was hired to write a sales page offering a book bundle of their best-selling book Put That Stuff Down.
Dec 2022
FAQ
What do I get with your landing page critique?
You’ll receive a report pinpointing why your copy isn’t converting (e.g., weak headlines, unclear CTAs) and provide tailored suggestions with examples.
How do I know if my landing page needs a critique?
If your ads get clicks but no sales, your landing page has low conversions, or customers aren’t engaging, your copy may be the issue.
Can you help me implement the changes?
Yes! My report includes actionable suggestions with examples. If you’re stuck, message me for guidance on applying the fixes.
Does your critique include auditing the design?
No, my service focuses only on your copy’s messaging (e.g., headlines, CTAs, audience alignment). I don’t audit design or visuals, but I’ll note if copy issues relate to design context.
Do you use tools like Hotjar for the audit?
No, I focus entirely on analyzing your copy’s messaging, not user behavior tools like Hotjar.
Can you critique copy written by AI?
Yes, I can critique AI-written copy! But keep in mind that, AI-written copy from poor prompts often requires the copy to be rewritten from scratch.
