I will provide screenplay coverage, script notes, story development and freedback

Most screenplays don't fail because the writer lacks talent.

They fail because the writer is solving the wrong problem.

After multiple rewrites, many writers know something isn't working, but they can't identify where the issue begins. The dialogue may be stronger. The scenes may be cleaner. Yet the screenplay still isn't creating the impact they intended.

Through reviewing screenplays across multiple genres, I've seen writers spend weeks fixing symptoms while the real story issue remains untouched.

Great scripts rarely fail because of one weak scene. More often, a deeper story issue quietly affects the entire screenplay.

My approach goes beyond listing strengths and weaknesses. I focus on identifying what isn't working, why it isn't working, and what changes can strengthen the story.

If you're preparing for contests, producers, investors, readers, or production, you'll receive screenplay consultation, story development feedback, script notes, and actionable recommendations.

Let's identify what's truly holding your screenplay back and unlock its strongest potential.