I will be your developmental editor or beta reader for fiction
Pro Editor and Publisher Helping Authors Create Exceptional Books
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About this Gig
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If you've completed a draft of your novel and want clear, professional guidance on how to strengthen it, developmental editing can help.
I'm Robin, a professional editor, writer, and publisher who's worked with authors on Fiverr since 2013. I aim to guide your rewrites with clear, actionable feedback so you know exactly what to improve and how to move the manuscript forward.
Developmental editing focuses on the big-picture elements of storytelling. I review your manuscript with attention to plot structure, pacing, character development, narrative arc, and scene effectiveness, and provide detailed feedback to help you shape the strongest possible version of your story.
You'll receive:
- thoughtful margin comments throughout the manuscript
- a comprehensive editorial letter outlining strengths, areas for improvement, and practical next steps for rewriting
Note: Does not include direct changes or copyedits. Dev editing is for feedback only! See my other gigs if you need copyediting or line editing instead.
Unsure what the right next step is? Questions about publishing? Please message before ordering!
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Coursera
Education Organization
Copyedited internal course content intended for Coursera instructors.
Nov 2020-Jan 2021
Ethereum
Crypto & Blockchain
Copyedited blog posts, newsletters, and internal correspondence related to the organization's decentralized blockchain platform and flagship cryptocurrency.
Jan 2015-Mar 2016
My Portfolio
Other Book Editing Services I Offer
FAQ
Can I get a quote?
Yes! Simply enter the total number of words in your editable text document into the field and you'll receive an accurate quote. You can use this approach to place an order, too. Of course, you can always message me and I'll send a custom offer.
Can you help me publish my book on Amazon KDP?
Yes! I can walk you through the process step by step. I also offer editing and formatting services in case you need more hands-on assistance.
What genres are you experienced in?
I'm a versatile editor comfortable across all genres, especially nonfiction, business, self-help, memoir, YA, sci-fi, horror, fantasy, thriller, mystery, and romance.
What kind of files do you work with?
I work with Microsoft Word documents only. Please submit a Word file for editing!
What will I receive with a developmental edit?
You’ll receive detailed comments throughout your manuscript along with a comprehensive editorial letter explaining strengths, areas for improvement, and practical suggestions for revision. The goal is to give you clear guidance so you know exactly how to strengthen the story during the rewrite.
Is developmental editing the same as line editing or proofreading?
No. Developmental editing addresses the structure and storytelling of the book. Line editing and copyediting focus on sentence-level clarity and grammar, while proofreading is the final stage that catches typos before publication. Developmental editing usually happens earlier in the process.
What are your revision policies?
As developmental editing is purely feedback-based, it includes one additional "revision," which is an opportunity to ask follow-up questions.
Is my manuscript ready for developmental editing?
Developmental editing works best once you’ve completed a full draft of your novel. It doesn’t need to be perfect, but the story should be complete so the overall structure, pacing, and character development can be evaluated.
Will you rewrite parts of my book?
No. My role is to provide professional editorial guidance, not to rewrite the manuscript. I’ll explain what is and isn’t working in the story and provide clear suggestions so you can revise the book while maintaining your own voice as the author.
Do you accept incomplete manuscripts or early drafts?
For developmental editing, the manuscript should be a complete draft of the novel. This allows me to evaluate the full story, including plot structure, pacing, and character development. If you’re still in the early drafting stage, it’s usually best to finish the manuscript first.
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Croatia
Haven’t really had too much inexperience with editors, but Robins edit felt smooth and done respectfully to the original text (…which, I assume was perhaps a bit challenging in this case :).
$200-$400
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?S sch123

United States
Robyn has done an outstanding job with my manuscript.
$200-$400
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?T taniuyes

United States
I am grateful for Robin's support throughout the editing process. Her meticulous editing skills enhanced my work and brought it to a polished state. She went above and beyond, adding depth and clarity to my vision. Robin is the best editor I have seen; her excellence lies in her ability to understand...
$400-$600
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?T tripodsolutions
Repeat Client

Canada
Robin Schroffel truly impressed with her professionalism in book editing, delivering work that stands out! Her proactive communication made working with her a breeze, keeping the project flowing smoothly. 🙌 Highly recommended!
$400-$600
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?S srg349
Repeat Client

United States
Thanks RS!
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?
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vel666
Repeat Client

Croatia
Haven’t really had too much inexperience with editors, but Robins edit felt smooth and done respectfully to the original text (…which, I assume was perhaps a bit challenging in this case :).
$200-$400
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?S sch123

United States
Robyn has done an outstanding job with my manuscript.
$200-$400
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?T taniuyes

United States
I am grateful for Robin's support throughout the editing process. Her meticulous editing skills enhanced my work and brought it to a polished state. She went above and beyond, adding depth and clarity to my vision. Robin is the best editor I have seen; her excellence lies in her ability to understand...
$400-$600
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?T tripodsolutions
Repeat Client

Canada
Robin Schroffel truly impressed with her professionalism in book editing, delivering work that stands out! Her proactive communication made working with her a breeze, keeping the project flowing smoothly. 🙌 Highly recommended!
$400-$600
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?S srg349
Repeat Client

United States
Thanks RS!
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?
