I will beta read your manuscript with inline comments and report
Refine and define lines, Write and ignite tales, Mark and spark sagas!
About this Gig
PLEASE MESSAGE ME BEFORE PLACING AN ORDER, THANK YOU.
Soft Whisper (USD$15 per 1,000 words)
1: Executive Summary - Strengths, fixes
2: Structure & Pacing - Arc, flow
3: Mechanics & Polish - Grammar, typos
4: Recommendations - Fast fixes, deep edit notes
Tender Bloom (USD$20 per 1,000 words)
1: Executive Summary - Strengths, fixes
2: Structure & Pacing - Arc, flow
3: Character Development - Motivation, arcs, voice
4: Plot & Conflict - Holes, escalation, subplot
5: Setting & World-Building - Sensory, rules
6: Theme, Tone & Voice - Clarity, tone, voice
7: Market Fit & Audience - Tropes, hooks, sell
8: Mechanics & Polish - Grammar, typos
9: Recommendations - Fast fixes, deep edit notes
Moonlight Kiss (USD$30 per 1,000 words)
1: Executive Summary - Strengths, fixes
2: Structure & Pacing - Arc, flow
3: Character Development - Motivation, arcs, voice
4: Plot & Conflict - Holes, escalation, subplot
5: Setting & World-Building - Sensory, rules
6: Theme, Tone & Voice - Clarity, tone, voice
7: Market Fit & Audience - Tropes, hooks, sell
8: Mechanics & Polish - Grammar, typos
9: Recommendations - Fast fixes, deep edit notes
10: Inline Edits - Sentence analyses, margin-style notes
Genre:
Romance
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
1: How is the total cost calculated for my manuscript (example: Moonlight Kiss, 80,000 words)?
Cost is words ÷ 1,000 × rate. For Moonlight Kiss at USD$30 per 1,000 words: 80,000 ÷ 1,000 = 80 80 × USD$30 = USD$2,400 I will send a custom offer through Inbox with the exact total, delivery time, and any applicable fees or rush charges once you share the full word count and file in .docx format.
2: What are the typical turnaround times for each package by manuscript length?
For Soft Whisper: 10k words ≈ 3 days 30k words ≈ 5 days 60k words ≈ 9 days 90k+ words ≈ 14+ days For Tender Bloom: 10k words ≈ 5 days 30k words ≈ 9 days 60k words ≈ 14 days 90k+ words ≈ 21+ days For Moonlight Kiss: 10k words ≈ 7 days 30k words ≈ 14 days 60k words ≈ 28 days 90k+ words ≈ 35+ days
3: Do you provide inline edits or only reports?
Gold clients receive a full critique report, as well as line-by-line inline edits and margin-style comments exclusively in Section D of Moonlight Kiss. Bronze (Soft Whisper) and Silver (Tender Bloom) packages deliver partial and detailed critique reports respectively without inline manuscript edits.
4: What is your revisions policy for each package?
Soft Whisper offers 1 complimentary revision within 7 days while Tender Bloom includes 2 complimentary revisions within 14 days. Next, Moonlight Kiss provides 3 complimentary revisions within 21 days. Additional revision(s) can be available after discussion for a reasonable fee through custom offer.
5: Which file format do you accept and prefer for edits?
I usually accept soft copies in the file format of .docx (Microsoft Word) mostly due to optimum efficiency in performing full analysis of complex manuscripts for detailed critique reports and accurate inline edits. Therefore, please readily convert the relevant manuscript to a Word document (.docx).
6: How do you count words for pricing?
Word count is taken from the uploaded manuscript (.docx) and rounded up to the next 1,000 words. For Moonlight Kiss at USD$30 per 1,000 words: an 80,123-word file rounds up to 81,000 words, → 81 × USD$30 = USD$2,430 Next, I will confirm the word count in Inbox before sending a final custom offer.
7: Will you keep my manuscript confidential and sign an NDA?
Yes, confidentiality is standard. I will treat your manuscript as private, never share or resell it, and can sign a non-disclosure agreement (NDA) on request. Feedback and edited file(s) remain yours as I will retain no rights. If you need extra security, we can discuss file handling terms in Inbox.
8: Do you offer a sample read so I can evaluate your feedback style?
I can only offer one complimentary sample (for now), because nearly all past clients required NDAs, except one who allowed sharing at my discretion. That client purchased the Moonlight Kiss premium package, so future clients can study that sample totally to explore the full depth of my premium work.
9: Do you assess market fit and provide positioning advice?
Yes, a complete market fit analysis is included in Tender Bloom as well as Moonlight Kiss. I assess genre conventions, tropes, target audience, and comparable titles, in addition to suggesting subgenre hooks and positioning. This helps you refine query letters, blurbs or marketing angles remarkably.
10: What is your refund and cancellation policy?
If cancellation is initiated before I begin the work, I will issue a full refund. Once I begin reading or have delivered work partially, refunds are limited and handled on a case-by-case basis. Usually, I prefer to resolve issues with revision(s), depending on the specific package that is purchased.

