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Nigeria

I speak English

Creative and Honest Feedback

I’m Jasmine, a passionate and honest beta reader who loves helping writers see their stories through a reader’s eyes. I provide thoughtful, constructive feedback on character development, plot, pacing...
About this Gig

Looking for objective feedback on your writing? Uncertain about how well your story hangs together, or whether your characters are engaging and plausible? Send your work to me for feedback!


I am an experienced Beta Reader who leans in the developmental edit direction, with quick turnaround times, a 1-2 page Reader Response Report, a detailed Questionnaire, in-document comments.


I will beta read your book, short story, or article and provide a detailed, constructive critique. My feedback will include commentary and analyses on structure, voice, reader engagement, language use, and anything else I find that may help you develop your work to its potential. If necessary, I'll provide a sample edit for spelling, grammar, or writing technique.


I DO NOT USE AI.


What you can expect working with me:

  • Detailed Feedback
  • Constructive Criticism
  • Confidentiality and Respect
  • Clear Communication


What i'll work on:

  • Plot and Structure
  • Pacing
  • Readability
  • Character development
  • Emotional Depth
  • Plot holes and Inconsistencies (+suggestions)
  • Overall feedback
  • Q&A


What you'll receive:

  1. A clear, organized feedback report (PDF)
  2. Summary of whats working


Message Me and let's talk about your manuscript!

Genre:

Adventure

Mystery

Romance

Science fiction

Fantasy

True crime

Language:

English

German

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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