I will beta read and critique your novel or chapters

United Kingdom

I speak English

Beta reader, editor and proofreader

I’m a writer, editor and beta reader that will provide thoughtful, constructive feedback while staying true to the author’s vision. I have written a novel myself and I’m currently writing two more, so...
About this Gig

Why work with me?


I'll give you the perspective of a reader and the guidance of a writer.


As well as inline comments and a reader report, I also provide chapter-by-chapter reader reactions, including my predictions, questions, and emotional investment going forward. This allows you to see exactly what expectations your writing is creating in a first-time reader.


Inline comments will cover:


  • How much the scene holds my attention
  • Character consistency & development 
  • Realism of dialogue 
  • Emotional impact
  • Clarity issues/Awkward wording
  • Particularly effective phrasing 


The end of chapter reader reaction will focus on:


  • Predictions
  • Questions I have
  • Emotional investment 
  • Pacing & flow
  • Worldbuilding


The final reader report will discuss:


  • The beginning hook & ending payoff
  • Effectiveness of story structure
  • How compelling I found the characters
  • If anything made me want to stop reading
  • What I took from the story/lasting impressions


Having written and revised my own novels, I understand how much dedication goes into completing a manuscript, and how much trust it takes to share it. My background as an English teacher also helps me provide clear, structured, and actionable feedback.

Genre:

Literary fiction

Mystery

Romance

Fantasy

Other

Language:

English

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