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I will fix your book structure to keep readers engaged
Expert Fitness Writer and Proofreader
I’m Ron Betta—Transformational Performance Consultant, founder of Ink Storm, and an Amazon Best Selling Author with multiple #1 category titles (Management Skills + Health & Fitness). I help authors a...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
About this Gig
If your book feels close but something is not working, this is for you. I provide developmental feedback focused on structure, clarity, pacing, and flow. I identify where readers get confused, where momentum slows, and what to fix first so you can revise with confidence before you pay for editing or publishing.
You will receive a written feedback report based on the package you choose, the premium option includes a prioritized revision plan so you are not guessing.
This is not proofreading or line editing. I do not correct grammar, rewrite text, or use tracked changes. This is big picture guidance that strengthens the foundation of your manuscript.
Word or PDF only, no Google Docs links. No revisions included. All manuscripts are handled confidentially.
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FAQ
Is this editing or proofreading?
No. This is developmental feedback only.
Do you rewrite text or use tracked changes?
No. Feedback is provided in a written report.
What file types do you accept?
Word or PDF only. No Google Docs.
Who is this best for?
Authors who want guidance on structure and clarity before editing or publishing.
Are results or sales guaranteed?
No. This provides direction, not guarantees.
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J jons_writes
United States
Ron, thanks a lot for taking a look at my manuscript. Your recommendations based off the initial brief met every mark, and the time in which you delivered was very much appreciated. Having these high level recommendations to help sharpen the focus and tighten the narrative of my book is exactly the kind of review/edit I was needing.
$100-$200
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5 days
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frankscauthor
Repeat Client
United States
Rob grabbed me with a well put-together video and will keep using him for his professionalism, speed, and thoughtfulness. His feedback was useful and actionable and he was a joy to work with. I feel much more comfortable with my piece after getting his feedback.
Up to $50
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6 days
Duration
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J jons_writes
United States
Ron, thanks a lot for taking a look at my manuscript. Your recommendations based off the initial brief met every mark, and the time in which you delivered was very much appreciated. Having these high level recommendations to help sharpen the focus and tighten the narrative of my book is exactly the kind of review/edit I was needing.
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?F frankscauthor
Repeat Client
United States
Rob grabbed me with a well put-together video and will keep using him for his professionalism, speed, and thoughtfulness. His feedback was useful and actionable and he was a joy to work with. I feel much more comfortable with my piece after getting his feedback.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?
