I will refine your pitch deck with investor insights

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About this gig

Your pitch deck isn't landing, and you don't know why.


Whether you're pitching investors, a competition panel, a grant committee, or an accelerator, the people deciding read fast and look for a reason to say no. Most founders are too close to their own story to see where a reader gets lost. I read your deck the way they do, then tell you exactly what to fix.


Every review includes:

- A scorecard across the 10 areas funders look for: problem, solution, how it works, market size, competition, go to market, traction, projections, team, and vision

- Written feedback on every slide: what's working, what's confusing, and what's missing


Deep Dive Review adds rewrite guidance for your 3 weakest slides and an honest verdict on whether your deck is ready to send.

Review & Live Session adds a 45 minute call to walk through everything together.


I've evaluated 300+ startup pitches professionally and coached more than a hundred founders preparing to pitch for funding. Earlier in my career, I worked on a venture capital investments team.


A revision means I check your updated deck against my original notes, not a full new review.

Get to know Alonso C

Alonso C

Growth strategist for early stage startups ands small businesses

  • FromUnited States
  • Member sinceSep 2026
  • Languages

    English, Spanish
I help startups and small businesses sharpen how they win customers and capital: the pitch, the positioning, and the plan behind them. I've evaluated 300+ startup pitches professionally and coached more than a hundred founders preparing to pitch to investors, competition panels, and grant committees. Earlier in my career, I worked on a venture capital investments team. I work in English and Spanish. Message me about where your business feels stuck, and I'll tell you where I'd start.