I will developmental edit format romance fantasy sci fi thriller

United States

I speak English

Fantasy Developmental Editor

I'm Ryan Blake, a developmental editor helping fantasy and thriller writers turn promising ideas into stories that hold together from the first page to the last. If your plot feels slow, your characte...
About this Gig

A good story can have a good idea and still feel slow, confusing, or unfinished. That's where developmental editing can help.


I'm Ryan Blake, a developmental editor working with writers of romance, fantasy, sci-fi, and thriller fiction. I look at the story as a whole and help you identify what is working, what is holding the manuscript back, and where it can become stronger.


I can help with:

  • Plot and story structure
  • Pacing and slow sections
  • Character development and arcs
  • Romance and relationship development
  • Conflict, tension, and stakes
  • Fantasy and sci-fi worldbuilding
  • Thriller suspense, reveals, and plot logic
  • Chapter flow and consistency
  • Endings that need more impact


You'll receive practical feedback on your manuscript, including what needs attention and why. I won't rewrite your book or make it sound like mine. Your voice and story stay yours.


Whether you have a rough first draft, a manuscript that feels stuck, or a nearly finished novel that needs perspective, I'll help you see the bigger story more clearly.


Send me your manuscript or a sample, and let's look at what's working and what could be stronger.


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Language:

English

Genre:

Adventure

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Horror/ thriller

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Mystery

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Science fiction

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Fantasy

Audience :

Children

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Teen / young adult

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Adult

POV:

First person

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Second person

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Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

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Intermediate

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Advanced

Voice:

Active

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