I will alpha or beta read your manuscript and give feedback

5.0
5.0

Germany

I speak English, German

74 orders completed

Gig Summary

Developmental editor and member of the EFA and Club Ed NO AI

I started out studying Japanese and Culture at Birkbeck, University of London, but ended up working in the theatre and film industry before returning to books. In 2019, I fell in love with developmen...
About this Gig

I'm a developmental editor, but offer beta reading in my favourite genres: romance, (cosy) fantasy, YA and thriller. As a beta reader, my primary focus lies in how a reader reacts to the manuscript. I'll provide feedback on what I enjoyed, what I found lacking or confusing, any potential plot holes, and areas where character development, story development and dialogue could be improved.


Essentially, a beta read serves as a test run to gauge how readers may respond to your book before it hits the market.


Examples of questions I might address:


  • Did the story immediately draw me in? If not, what could be improved?
  • Were there any parts of the story that were unclear or confusing? If so, which ones?
  • What was my impression of the setting/world-building?
  • Did the characters feel realistic and relatable?
  • Were there any parts of the story where it felt like it was dragging? How could this be improved?
  • Did the flow and pace of the story feel effective?
  • Did the dialogue sound natural and authentic to the characters?
  • Was the ending satisfying for me as a reader?



In this gig, I focus on annotations, but a brief reader's report is included. I'm also willing to answer a questionnaire!

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Mystery

Romance

Language:

English

German

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

17 reviews for this Gig
5.0

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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    5
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    riefer02

    US

    United States

    5

    I was really impressed with Sahra’s feedback. She helped identify narrative flaws that, once addressed, will guide me in crafting a more riveting story for my readers to understand and enjoy.

    $200-$400

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    mvhoang99

    US

    United States

    5

    You get every dime you pay for with Sahra. Her report and in-line comments were extremely detailed. She offered such a unique perspective on the transcript that will really help in my next round of edits. Overall, I would 100% recommend and will be returning for future reads.

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    dabdubt

    DE

    Germany

    4.3

    Sarah hat das Manuskript sorgfältig und aufmerksam gelesen und wertvolles Feedback geliefert. Sehr empfehlenswert - ich würde gerne wieder mit ihr arbeiten.

    $100-$200

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R

    renns333

    CR

    Costa Rica

    5

    Sahra hat mein Manuskript mit viel Liebe zum Detail und einem tiefen Verständnis beta-gelesen und hilfreiche Annotationen und einen schönen Report erstellt. Ich kann die Zusammenarbeit sehr empfehlen.

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    julian_nejj

    DE

    Germany

    5

    Sahra arbeitet wirklich mit Herz und Verstand! Die Kommentare sowie der Report helfen mir extrem weiter und geben mir eine super Basis um mein Projekt professionell fortzuführen. Die Kommunikation war extrem freundlich, offen und ehrlich! Das Ergebnis ist absolut top! :)

    $100-$200

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

17 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(16)
(1)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • R
    image-docs

    riefer02

    US

    United States

    5

    I was really impressed with Sahra’s feedback. She helped identify narrative flaws that, once addressed, will guide me in crafting a more riveting story for my readers to understand and enjoy.

    $200-$400

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    mvhoang99

    US

    United States

    5

    You get every dime you pay for with Sahra. Her report and in-line comments were extremely detailed. She offered such a unique perspective on the transcript that will really help in my next round of edits. Overall, I would 100% recommend and will be returning for future reads.

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    dabdubt

    DE

    Germany

    4.3

    Sarah hat das Manuskript sorgfältig und aufmerksam gelesen und wertvolles Feedback geliefert. Sehr empfehlenswert - ich würde gerne wieder mit ihr arbeiten.

    $100-$200

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R

    renns333

    CR

    Costa Rica

    5

    Sahra hat mein Manuskript mit viel Liebe zum Detail und einem tiefen Verständnis beta-gelesen und hilfreiche Annotationen und einen schönen Report erstellt. Ich kann die Zusammenarbeit sehr empfehlen.

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    julian_nejj

    DE

    Germany

    5

    Sahra arbeitet wirklich mit Herz und Verstand! Die Kommentare sowie der Report helfen mir extrem weiter und geben mir eine super Basis um mein Projekt professionell fortzuführen. Die Kommunikation war extrem freundlich, offen und ehrlich! Das Ergebnis ist absolut top! :)

    $100-$200

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No