I will do a developmental edit of your book

I find the depth your manuscript already has - and the patterns holding it back.

My background in acting gives me a lens for character psychology and dialogue. My pattern-recognition brain catches how a detail in Chapter 3 could echo through your climax, spots when different scenes are repeating the same power dynamic, and finds thematic threads you can strengthen into motifs.

I work across genres.

What I catch:

• The motivation gap in Chapter 12 breaking your climax
• Scenes that look different but follow the same pattern
• Dialogue subtext and what characters aren't saying
• Thematic connections you can deepen
• Where emotional beats need restraint instead of display

What you get:

• Detailed annotations with specific suggestions and examples
• Comprehensive editorial report covering strengths and areas for improvement
• Actionable feedback explaining why something isn't working and how to fix it

I listen to your vision, analyse what's on the page, then help you bridge that gap. You'll leave with clarity and confidence in your revision direction.

Sample edit: 1500 words + report taster for $20.

Message me to discuss your project.