I will give honest beta reader feedback for your manuscript

Nigeria

I speak English, Yoruba

BOOK FORMATTING AND BOOK EDITING

I am Sam. Oluyemi a professional book formatter and editor based in Lagos, Nigeria, specializing in transforming manuscripts into polished, publication-ready books. With expertise in book formatting, ...
About this Gig


Have you finished your manuscript but need honest, reader-focused feedback before publishing?


You're in the right place.


As your beta reader, I'll read your manuscript from a real reader's perspective and provide clear, constructive feedback to help you strengthen your story before it reaches your audience.


What you will receive:

  • Honest beta reading feedback
  • Detailed manuscript critique
  • In-depth novel feedback
  • Reader-focused manuscript review
  • Suggestions to improve your story without changing your unique writing style


My feedback focuses on:

  • Plot and story development
  • Pacing and chapter flow
  • Character development
  • Dialogue and emotional impact
  • World-building and consistency
  • Plot holes and confusing scenes
  • Areas that need improvement
  • Parts that work well and keep readers engaged
  • Scenes that can be cut or expanded
  • Overall reader experience


I specialize in fiction, including:

  • Romance
  • Fantasy
  • Thriller
  • Mystery
  • Young Adult
  • Contemporary Fiction


My feedback is honest, respectful, and easy to understand. I write in simple language and explain what works, what doesn't, and how you can make your manuscript stronger.


I will provide thoughtful and actionable feedback to help you.



Genre:

Action

Children’s books

Fanfiction

Horror/ thriller

Language:

English

German

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