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I will be your romance book editor and proofreader for amazon KDP ebook
expert in book editing
I'm Sarah Damon, a certified English professional with 6+ years of editing experience. Great stories don't lose readers because the idea is weak; they lose them through slow pacing, inconsistent chara...
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About this Gig
I edit any kind of romance book and I'll help you turn rough, distracting prose into smooth, emotionally engaging romance while protecting the voice and personality behind your story. I'm a professional romance book editor, line editor, and proofreader. I don't just look for commas and spelling mistakes.
I look at your writing as a reader would and professionally edit your book to it's best
I'll help you strengthen:
Chemistry & Emotional Impact
Make the attraction, tension, vulnerability, and emotional moments land harder.
Pacing & Engagement
Tighten slow, repetitive, or unnecessary sections so readers have fewer reasons to put the book down.
Sentence Flow & Prose
Fix awkward, clunky, repetitive, or confusing sentences without making your writing sound generic.
Final Polish
Give your manuscript a thorough final proofread so it feels clean, polished, and ready for readers.
I work with contemporary romance, dark romance, billionaire romance, steamy romance, and other romance fiction.
Please message me before placing an order so we can discuss the depth of your manuscript, your editing needs, and the level of editing that will best suit your book.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Do you specialize in romance books?
Yes. I edit romance fiction, including contemporary romance, dark romance, billionaire romance, steamy romance, paranormal romance, romantasy, and other romance subgenres.
What types of editing do you provide?
I provide developmental editing, proofreading, copy editing, and line editing. I can improve grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, word choice, flow, dialogue, repetition, consistency, and readability while preserving your writing style.
Will you change my writing style or voice?
No. My goal is to polish your manuscript, not rewrite it into someone else's style. I preserve your unique voice, tone, characters, and storytelling.
Do you use Track Changes?
Yes. I can use Microsoft Word Track Changes and comments so you can easily review, accept, or reject individual changes.
Can I see a sample of your editing first?
Yes. Send me a short sample of your manuscript and I'll discuss the editing approach with you before you place a larger order.
Can you edit more than 50000 words?
Please message me before placing your order. This allows me to understand the scope of your manuscript, review your word count and requirements, and provide you with the most appropriate package or a custom offer for your project.
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B brassfiled_ken
United States
I genuinely loved working with Sarah on my book! She did an expectation job with the structural editing, with clear communication and attention to details and even delivered beyond my expectation. I truly recommend her work and would recommend her also for future projects. She made the whole experience...
$50-$100
Price
4 days
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ahudson
United States
Sarah Damon did an excellent job with the beta/development reading. It wasn't just a quick review and short write up, but a comprehensive breakdown chapter by chapter. Looking forward to working with her again. Also, she can work with genres beyond romance novels, as mine was fantasy.
$100-$200
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?A ahudson
United States
Great job as always!
$100-$200
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5 days
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B brassfiled_ken
United States
I genuinely loved working with Sarah on my book! She did an expectation job with the structural editing, with clear communication and attention to details and even delivered beyond my expectation. I truly recommend her work and would recommend her also for future projects. She made the whole experience...
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?A ahudson
United States
Sarah Damon did an excellent job with the beta/development reading. It wasn't just a quick review and short write up, but a comprehensive breakdown chapter by chapter. Looking forward to working with her again. Also, she can work with genres beyond romance novels, as mine was fantasy.
$100-$200
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?A ahudson
United States
Great job as always!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
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