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I will review your fantasy story
Indonesia
I speak English, Indonesian
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About this Gig
Need an honest, thoughtful second opinion on your story? I'd love to help!
Whether you're writing a fantasy novel, web novel, fanfiction, sci-fi adventure, romance, or another fictional work, I'll read your story carefully and provide constructive, reader-focused feedback to help you improve it while preserving your unique voice.
My feedback can cover:
- Plot and pacing
- Characters and character development
- Dialogue
- Worldbuilding and lore
- Magic systems and internal consistency
- Emotional impact
- Story flow and readability
- Hook and reader engagement
- Strengths and areas for improvement
I enjoy reading fantasy, science fiction, mystery, action, adventure, isekai, progression fantasy, and light novels, but I'm happy to review most genres.
I won't rewrite your story or use AI to generate feedback. Every review is based on my own reading and honest impressions, with practical suggestions you can apply to strengthen your work.
Please contact me before ordering so we can discuss your manuscript, word count, and choose the package that best fits your needs.
Language:
English
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Indonesian
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
1. What genres do you review?
I primarily enjoy fantasy, sci-fi, adventure, mystery, action, progression fantasy, isekai, light novels, and fanfiction. However, I'm happy to review most fiction genres. Feel free to message me before ordering if you're unsure.
2. Will you edit or rewrite my story?
No. This gig focuses on reader feedback and constructive critique, not proofreading or ghostwriting. I'll explain what works well, what could be improved, and provide practical suggestions while respecting your unique writing style.
3. Will the feedback be written by AI?
No. Every review is personally read and written by me. My feedback is based on my own impressions, analysis, and reading experience to provide genuine and thoughtful insights.
4. What kind of feedback will I receive?
Depending on the package you choose, I'll comment on areas such as plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, worldbuilding, consistency, emotional impact, reader engagement, and overall storytelling. My goal is to help you strengthen your story, not simply point out flaws.
5. Can you review unfinished chapters or works in progress?
Yes! You don't need a completed manuscript. I can review individual chapters, short stories, or works in progress and provide feedback based on what you've written so far.
6. Is my manuscript confidential?
Absolutely. Your work remains your intellectual property and will be kept private. I will never share, publish, or use your manuscript without your permission.
7. Should I contact you before placing an order?
Yes, especially for longer manuscripts or custom requests. Send me your word count, genre, and what kind of feedback you're looking for, and I'll recommend the most suitable package.
