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I will critique your novel chapter and give actionable feedback
United States
I speak English
Book Ghostwriter Narrative Structure Specialist Published Author
I help people turn ideas into complete, structured, finished books.
Most writers don’t struggle with writing. They struggle with structure, pacing, and finishing.
I’m a published author with multipl...
About this Gig
Most feedback writers get is vague. That doesnt help you improve.
I provide direct, structured critique you can actually use.
Im a published author with decades of experience. I focus on whats working, what isnt, and exactly how to fix it.
What I evaluate:
- Hook and opening strength
- Pacing and flow
- Character clarity and consistency
- Dialogue effectiveness
- Scene structure and tension
Youll get clear, actionable notes. No fluff.
This is a critique and feedback service. I do not rewrite your content.
I do not offer expedited delivery. Each project receives focused, high-quality attention and is completed in the order received.
Word limits are strict. Additional words require an extra fee.
If youre serious about improving your writing, send me your chapter.
Language:
English
Content type:
Book
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Short story
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What is included in this service?
You’ll receive structured feedback on your writing, including strengths, issues, and specific suggestions for improvement.
Is this editing or proofreading?
No. This is a critique service focused on story, structure, pacing, and readability.
Will you rewrite my content?
No. I provide feedback and suggestions, not full rewrites.
What format should I submit?
Word (.doc or .docx) is preferred. Google Docs is also acceptable.
What genres do you work with?
Primarily fiction and novels, especially character-driven and speculative work.
How strict are the word limits?
Word limits are strict. Additional words require an extra fee.
Do you offer faster delivery?
No. Each project is completed in order to ensure quality.
Will you be honest in your feedback?
Yes. Feedback is direct, constructive, and focused on improvement.
