I will beta read your first chapter, sapphic, trans, queer narratives with feedback
About this Gig
Welcome!
If you're writing a Sapphic, trans, or queer-centered story, you're in the right place. Ill beta read your first chapter and give honest, respectful, and constructive feedback to help your story shine from page one.
What You Get:
- A beta read of your first chapter (up to [X] words)
- Written feedback on pacing, tone, character voice, and representation
- Optional in-text comments (Word or PDF)
Why Me:
- I specialize in queer narratives and provide identity-aware insight
- I balance honest critique with kindness and clarity
- I understand how vital authentic, respectful representation is especially up front
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How It Works:
- Send your chapter
- I beta read it as your ideal reader would
- You receive detailed, thoughtful feedback delivered on time
Lets make your opening unforgettable and true to your vision.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What’s included in the beta read?
You’ll receive written feedback on your first chapter, including notes on pacing, clarity, tone, character development, emotional engagement, and the representation of queer, sapphic, or trans identities. Optional inline comments are available for Word or PDF files.
What genres do you work with?
I work with most fiction genres, including romance, fantasy, sci-fi, literary fiction, and contemporary. As long as your story features queer, sapphic, or trans characters or themes, I’m happy to help.

