I will give you feedback and script notes on your screenplay or TV pilot

I will read your screenplay and meet with you (over Zoom) to give you professional feedback. Feedback may include notes on format, structure, character, dialogue, plot development, and anything else you need or want to work on. If needed, we will brainstorm solutions and help you work through "blocks." This is an "intensive" session, and the goal is to make your screenplay as strong as possible. You will receive the same care and attention to detail that I provide my MFA students and industry colleagues. If you choose, we can set aside time to brainstorm other ideas or answer your questions about the industry. It's up to you! NOTE: Sessions are one hour, 90 minutes, or two hours depending on the package you choose, and page count is based on standard industry screenplay format.

WHY SHOULD WE WORK TOGETHER?

My work has been produced by a major Hollywood studio.

I teach screenwriting for an MFA program.

I have served on the jury for prominent screenplay competitions.

THIS SESSION DOES NOT INCLUDE WRITTEN FEEDBACK. Please read FAQ. If you have questions, I invite you to contact me before ordering. I look forward to hearing from you!