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I will talk with you for an hour on phone or zoom about your script
I've been writing screenplays since the 1980's, working with many producers and production companies. I was a script reader for several producers, including Hearst Entertainment and helped develop ma...
About this Gig
Being a script reader (and screenwriter) and working for top producers, I know that your first 10 pages can make or break you. Many producers will not go beyond 10 pages unless they are fully engaged
in your script. You have to "grab" them -- and not let them go. It must be a page-turner.
If you can do that, chances are your entire script is going to be read and seriously considered.
I can show you what you need in your first ten to do just that.
Send me your first 10 pages of your screenplay (PDF) and I will send you back studio-level development notes.
*Or, if you choose one of my other packages, send me your full script and I will send back studio-level development notes on your complete screenplay -- or do an extensive rewrite for you to give you the best chance to "grab" those producers.
in your script. You have to "grab" them -- and not let them go. It must be a page-turner.
If you can do that, chances are your entire script is going to be read and seriously considered.
I can show you what you need in your first ten to do just that.
Send me your first 10 pages of your screenplay (PDF) and I will send you back studio-level development notes.
*Or, if you choose one of my other packages, send me your full script and I will send back studio-level development notes on your complete screenplay -- or do an extensive rewrite for you to give you the best chance to "grab" those producers.
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FAQ
Can you guarantee me that, if you work on my script, it will be produced?
No. Nobody can guarantee you your script will be produced (unless it's a producer). I CAN guarantee you that I will do all I can to use my expertise to improve your script so that it will have a better chance to be produced. Many scripts that I've worked on have made it to the screen.
Are you going to write on my script?
No. I will send you separate notes in a PDF file.
When you send back your development notes, do you also make specific rewriting suggestions?
I usually only offer specific rewriting suggestions when I do an extensive rewrite, but if I see a way for you to improve your description or even dialogue, I will include that in my development notes.
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Fast turnaround. Pro-level notes. Thanks!
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United States
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very professional
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United Kingdom
Thank you very much. You are brilliant. Will use you again.
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raleigh95
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Amazing job as always
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U user72700307
United States
Fast turnaround. Pro-level notes. Thanks!
Helpful?M maefannie1
Repeat Client
United States
very knowledgeable
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Helpful?M maefannie1
Repeat Client
United States
very professional
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Helpful?S stheophilou
United Kingdom
Thank you very much. You are brilliant. Will use you again.
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Helpful?R raleigh95
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United States
Amazing job as always
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