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I will professionally developmental edit your fiction manuscript
About this Gig
Comprehensive Developmental Editing
Best for: Authors who want serious, professional-level feedback on structure, pacing, character arcs, and overall narrative strategy.
What's Included:
In-depth developmental analysis of plot, structure, and character development
Chapter-by-chapter feedback on pacing, stakes, tension, and consistency
Strategic suggestions for scene restructuring and story improvement
Annotated manuscript with clear, actionable guidance
(Premium tier includes series notes and a Zoom consultation)
Edits are delivered via Google Comments and Track Changes, organized, readable, and solution-focused.
We don't just point out problems. We provide direction. You'll receive thoughtful, publishing-level notes designed to strengthen your manuscript and elevate reader engagement.
Turnaround: Based on selected package (14-30 days standard).
Pricing:
Basic: $175 (up to 10,000 words)
Standard: $425 (up to 50,000 words)
Premium: $650 (up to 90,000 words)
Additional words and expedited delivery are available.
Want to preview our editing style?
Send your first 300 words for a free mini-review.
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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I was honestly blown away by the feedback I received. It was thoughtful and beneficial without taking away from my story. They explained their ideas for improving the story. You can really tell they care about making your book better. I can't wait to give them the rest of the manuscript.
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Repeat Client
United States
I was honestly blown away by the feedback I received. It was thoughtful and beneficial without taking away from my story. They explained their ideas for improving the story. You can really tell they care about making your book better. I can't wait to give them the rest of the manuscript.
Up to $50
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8 days
Duration
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