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I will beta read your fantasy scifi manuscript for plot, worldbuilding, and pacing
Get the story that makes a difference!
I’m Ali, a fantasy/sci-fi ghostwriter specializing in immersive RPG lore and worldbuilding, backed by over 6 years of experience as a Dungeon Master.
Holding a Bachelor’s in English Literature, I spe...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
About this Gig
Are plot holes, slow pacing, or weak worldbuilding holding your manuscript back from publishing success? As a published author who grew up reading Tolkien, Le Guin, and classic sci-fi, I provide actionable developmental beta reading for fantasy, sci-fi, and dystopian novels. I'll read your manuscript through the eyes of your ideal target audience and analyse how your story connects, where it drags, and how to sharpen it into an unputdownable read.
What You Will Receive:
- Comprehensive Reader Report: Detailed feedback covering opening hooks, plot structure, pacing, character arcs, and dialogue.
- Deep Speculative Critique: Focused evaluation of your worldbuilding consistency, magic systems/tech logic, and immersion.
- In-Document Reader Reactions: Optional margin comments sharing real-time thoughts as I read.
- Custom Questions Addressed: Direct answers to any specific concerns you have about your draft.
Why Choose This Service?
- 100% Human Expertise: No AI tools used. Every insight comes directly from a real reader's perspective.
- Constructive & Honest: Balanced critique highlighting what needs fixing alongside what works brilliantly.
Send me a message and let's get started!
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Dragonzard
I worked with the client to write the lore, character backstories and campaigns for the role playing game.
Jan 2023
Fantasy Flight Games
I have been writing fantasy RPG games content including stories, world-building, dialogues, campaigns, and backstories.
Sep 2022
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FAQ
Do you use AI or automated tools to read or generate feedback reports for the fantasy scifi manuscript?
Never. I write all feedback myself using 100% human analysis. Every structural critique, worldbuilding reaction, and line of feedback comes directly from my authentic perspective as a reader.
How do you deliver your feedback on manuscript betaread?
I deliver your feedback as a structured PDF or Word Reader Response Report, complete with detailed section breakdowns as displayed in the gig. If your package includes it, I also provide in-document margin comments sharing my real-time reactions as I read.
Can I send specific questions or areas I want you to focus on?
Yes! I encourage you to include a custom questionnaire targeting specific plot twists, magic systems, character chemistry, or worldbuilding elements you want me to pay special attention to.
Do you proofread or fix grammar and formatting issues?
No. My beta reading focuses strictly on story mechanics, pacing, and narrative flow. However, if I notice recurring typos while reading, I will briefly flag them in your final report.
Is my manuscript safe and confidential with you?
Completely. I treat your manuscript and intellectual property with strict confidentiality and permanently delete all copies from my devices once your order is complete. We are also under a Fiverr NDA.
How do you handle worldbuilding analysis for fantasy and sci-fi?
I evaluate your magic systems, tech logic, lore integration, sensory atmosphere, and internal consistency. My goal is to ensure your world feels deeply immersive without overwhelming the reader with info-dumps.
What happens if you find major plot holes or severe pacing issues in my novel?
I will give you honest, constructive, and actionable feedback detailing exactly where the issue occurs, why it disrupts reader engagement, and practical suggestions on how you can fix it.
Do you beta read shorter manuscripts like novellas or initial sample chapters?
Yes, absolutely. My Basic package is designed for initial chapter samples (up to 10k words), while novellas and full-length epic manuscripts are covered under my Standard and Premium packages.
