I will do fantasy developmental editing and manuscript critique

Are you struggling with plot holes, confusing magic systems, or slow pacing that stalls your epic fantasy or sci-fi adventure? 

As a specialized fantasy developmental editor, I analyze your manuscript to turn your rough draft into a gripping, immersive masterpiece. I provide actionable, creative solutions to elevate your storytelling while keeping your unique voice intact.

What I evaluate in your fantasy/sci-fi manuscript:

• World-Building & Lore: Ensuring your setting feels immersive without overwhelming info-dumps.
• Magic Systems & Tech: Checking rules, consistency, and integration into the plot.
• Pacing & Stakes: Keeping the narrative tension high across your structural beats.
• Character Arcs: Refining your protagonist's growth, flaws, and motivations.

What you will receive:

1. A detailed Editorial Letter breaking down major story elements.

2. Inline Comments directly on your Microsoft Word manuscript.

Note: This gig focuses strictly on world structure, plot, and character development. It does not include grammar proofreading.

Please message me before ordering to discuss your universe!