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I will beta read and review your thriller book
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
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Are you looking for sharp, insightful feedback on your thriller or mystery manuscript? Whether you're crafting a gritty detective noir, a slow-burning psychological thriller, or a fast-paced whodunit, I'll help you fine-tune your story without compromising your voice.
Some of the things I consider while reading include:
- Does the opening create immediate tension or intrigue?
- Are the stakes clear and escalating?
- Do the twists land effectively, or are they predictable?
- Are the characters' motivations and actions believable?
- Is the pacing tight, or are there moments that drag?
- Does the ending deliver a satisfying payoff or reveal?
- Are there plot holes, logic gaps, or inconsistencies?
- What scenes stood out as especially gripping?
Why trust me with your thriller or mystery manuscript?
I'm an avid reader of dark, twisty fiction and know what keeps readers turning pages late into the night. My goal is to help your story keep them guessing and gasping until the final chapter.
Genre:
Horror/ thriller
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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5 reviews for this Gig
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W writermg
United States
Incredibly professional, on time (early, actually), and solid feedback.
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?R rockpoet
Repeat Client
Hong Kong
My second novel read by Shannon and her comments are really useful. From what I can see she is able to identify the "blocks" that are missing in the plot or the pacing, and she doesn't get bogged down in detail. Which is exactly what I want from a beta-reader. So to a basic question "Did she provide...
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?R rockpoet
Repeat Client
Hong Kong
The review was concise and addressed all the issues I wanted addressing. It is amazingly valuable for and gives me (I hope) all the feedback I need to upgrade the novel. Sharron delivered ahead of schedule which was a great bonus for me. I would like to work with her again
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?L lizlang2024
Australia
Shannon's review was very well thought out and will be very helpful as I redraft my novel. She had a strong focus on areas for improvement which demonstrated her insight into the thriller genre.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?D 
drkalliet
Australia
Shannon provided really helpful insights about what worked and did not work with my story. Her work is very affordable for the quality of feedback she offers. I will definitely consider choosing to work with her again!
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
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Reviews
5 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
W writermg
United States
Incredibly professional, on time (early, actually), and solid feedback.
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?R rockpoet
Repeat Client
Hong Kong
My second novel read by Shannon and her comments are really useful. From what I can see she is able to identify the "blocks" that are missing in the plot or the pacing, and she doesn't get bogged down in detail. Which is exactly what I want from a beta-reader. So to a basic question "Did she provide...
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?R rockpoet
Repeat Client
Hong Kong
The review was concise and addressed all the issues I wanted addressing. It is amazingly valuable for and gives me (I hope) all the feedback I need to upgrade the novel. Sharron delivered ahead of schedule which was a great bonus for me. I would like to work with her again
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?L lizlang2024
Australia
Shannon's review was very well thought out and will be very helpful as I redraft my novel. She had a strong focus on areas for improvement which demonstrated her insight into the thriller genre.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?D drkalliet
Australia
Shannon provided really helpful insights about what worked and did not work with my story. Her work is very affordable for the quality of feedback she offers. I will definitely consider choosing to work with her again!
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
S Seller's Response
Helpful?
