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I will beta read psychological horror fantasy romance novel developmental edit ya eroti
Fiction editor, KDP formatter for journals, romance, fantasy, thriller authors
Catch errors before readers do
Your readers will notice every missing comma, every awkward sentence, every formatting slip. Let me catch them first.
I'm Sharon, a fiction editor specialising in roman...
About this Gig
HI!
I offer professional beta reading & developmental editing for writers working in comic, psychological horror, fantasy, sci fic, romance, YA, & mature/erotic fiction.
Whether you're in the early drafting stage or refining your manuscript, I provide thoughtful, honest, & constructive feedback to help elevate your story.
As a beta reader, I focus on the:
- Readers experience
- How engaging, immersive
- Emotionally impactful your story feels.
I'll highlight what's working
what may be confusing
where the story loses momentum.
For developmental editing,
- I take a deeper approach
- Analyzing the core elements of your manuscript,
- Including plot structure
- Pacing
- Character development
- Tension
- Narrative flow
I also provide actionable suggestions to strengthen your storytelling and ensure your ideas are clearly and effectively communicated.
I am especially attentive to:
- Atmosphere and tension in psychological horror
- World-building and consistency in fantasy
- Emotional depth and chemistry in romance
- Voice, pacing, and relatability in YA
- Tone, balance, and narrative purpose in mature themes
My goal is to help you refine your manuscript while preserving your unique voice and vision.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What’s the difference between beta reading and developmental editing?
Beta reading focuses on the reader’s experience—overall impressions, engagement, and clarity. Developmental editing goes deeper, analyzing structure, pacing, character arcs, and providing detailed suggestions for improvement.
How many words are included in this service?
Each package covers up to 50,000 words. If your manuscript is longer, we can discuss a custom offer.
What kind of feedback will I receive?
You’ll receive clear, constructive, and honest feedback. Depending on the package, this may include general notes, in-line comments, and/or a detailed editorial report with actionable recommendations.
Will you edit grammar and spelling?
This gig focuses on beta reading and developmental editing, not line editing or proofreading. However, I may point out recurring issues where relevant.
Can you work with sensitive or explicit content?
Yes, I am comfortable working with mature and explicit themes, including erotic content, and I handle all material professionally and respectfully.
