I will critique and edit your query letter and book proposal

United States

I speak English, Spanish, French, Italian, German

Helping Authors Find the Right Literary Agents and Prepare Strong, Professional

I’m Lucy Sharon Hannah, a literary agent finder and publishing support professional helping authors prepare and navigate the path to literary representation. I provide literary agent research, query l...
About this Gig

Have you already written your query letter or book proposal, but still feel unsure about sending it to a literary agent?


That hesitation is understandable. You may have spent months or years on your manuscript, and the last thing you want is to send your submission before you know whether your pitch is clear, convincing, and easy for an agents to follow.


Ill give your materials a fresh professional query review, looking at what an agent sees first and where your submission may need more clarity or polish. Ill keep your voice and story at the center while pointing out what needs strengthening.


What I can help with:


  • Query letter critique & review
  • Query letter editing & polishing
  • Hook, pitch & structure feedback
  • Book proposal review & editing
  • Synopsis and author bio feedback


I work with Romance, Fantasy, Science Fiction, Mystery, Thriller, Horror, Literary Fiction, Historical Fiction, Women Fiction, YA, Children Books, Memoir, Self-Help, Business, Christian books and more.

Genre:

Children’s books

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Memoir/ biography

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Romance

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Science fiction

Language:

English

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