I will be your developmental book editor and beta reader
Gig Summary
Taking your writing to the next level
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
knidhi1

United States
Shaun did the development edit of my fiction manuscript. His inline comments and suggestions were very helpful in improving the quality of the manuscript.
knidhi1

United States
Shaun development-edited the first chapter of a novel. His work was very professional, and his suggestions greatly improved the manuscript.
emglenn

United States
I ordered to get a sample draft to get an idea of how we'd work together. I appreciate the level of detail, reminders not to head hope in the POV, explaining...
siobhanreinecke

Ireland
Fast turnaround and very thorough — detailed comments throughout both chapters, along with an overall summary. Clear, friendly communication from start to finish. Booking the full manuscript edit.
impressionse

United States
Shaun is a wonderful developmental editor. He helped me see things in my manuscript I hadn’t seen myself, providing actionable feedback that I know will make...
About this Gig
*Please contact me before placing an order. I will do my best to help.*
Do you want fast, friendly, sincere feedback?
I'm Shaun and I'm an editor working across all genres, fiction and non-fiction. I have a Bachelor's Degree in English Literature and I'm also a published author and playwright. Because I've worked in the industry for over nine years, I know the importance of an affordable, thorough developmental editor.
What I provide
Numerous suggestions within the manuscript to improve your story
A detailed editor's report summarising my findings
Two read throughs so all issues are addressed
Message follow-up where you can ask me about the feedback I have provided
A speedy delivery
My editing focuses on several areas
Character development, arcs and inconsistencies
Plot development and plot holes
Pacing
Show, don't tell
Structural editing
Comprehension
Use of language
Repeated words and phrases
Commercial appeal
Although this is not a proof-reading service, I will also identify typos to get you one step closer to publication.
No AI is used in this service.
Unsure if I'm the editor for you? Send me a message with any questions.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
My Portfolio
Other Book Editing Services I Offer
FAQ
How should I submit my writing?
Please submit in a Word Doc.
Should I contact you before placing an order?
Yes, please. You need to know I am the editor for you, but I also need to know if I can complete the job to your satisfaction. I never want to start a job without knowing I can do it well. Send me a message and we can chat.
396 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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K knidhi1
Repeat Client

United States
Shaun did the development edit of my fiction manuscript. His inline comments and suggestions were very helpful in improving the quality of the manuscript.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K knidhi1
Repeat Client

United States
Shaun development-edited the first chapter of a novel. His work was very professional, and his suggestions greatly improved the manuscript.
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?E emglenn

United States
I ordered to get a sample draft to get an idea of how we'd work together. I appreciate the level of detail, reminders not to head hope in the POV, explaining what might work better, and what does work. This allowed me to see if I want to go all in for the developmental edit. I do, fantastic job!
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?S siobhanreinecke

Ireland
Fast turnaround and very thorough — detailed comments throughout both chapters, along with an overall summary. Clear, friendly communication from start to finish. Booking the full manuscript edit.
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?I impressionse

United States
Shaun is a wonderful developmental editor. He helped me see things in my manuscript I hadn’t seen myself, providing actionable feedback that I know will make the next version of my draft even better. I would definitely work with him again in the future!
$200-$400
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
396 reviews for this Gig
| (388) | ||
| (7) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (0) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
K knidhi1
Repeat Client

United States
Shaun did the development edit of my fiction manuscript. His inline comments and suggestions were very helpful in improving the quality of the manuscript.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K knidhi1
Repeat Client

United States
Shaun development-edited the first chapter of a novel. His work was very professional, and his suggestions greatly improved the manuscript.
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?E emglenn

United States
I ordered to get a sample draft to get an idea of how we'd work together. I appreciate the level of detail, reminders not to head hope in the POV, explaining what might work better, and what does work. This allowed me to see if I want to go all in for the developmental edit. I do, fantastic job!
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?S siobhanreinecke

Ireland
Fast turnaround and very thorough — detailed comments throughout both chapters, along with an overall summary. Clear, friendly communication from start to finish. Booking the full manuscript edit.
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?I impressionse

United States
Shaun is a wonderful developmental editor. He helped me see things in my manuscript I hadn’t seen myself, providing actionable feedback that I know will make the next version of my draft even better. I would definitely work with him again in the future!
$200-$400
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?

