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I will beta read and critique your litrpg, webnovel, or fantasy story
LitRPG and Fantasy Beta Reading, Proofreading and Ghostwriting
I specialize in LitRPG, webnovels, and fantasy writing, offering beta reading, proofreading, and ghostwriting. With professional experience in storytelling and editing, I deliver polished, engaging co...
About this Gig
Are you writing a LitRPG, webnovel, or fantasy story and need honest, detailed feedback to keep readers hooked?
As a webnovelist and genre enthusiast, I specialize in beta reading and giving actionable insights to help you improve pacing, characters, and worldbuilding all while respecting your creative voice.
Heres what youll get:
-Thoughtful, in-depth feedback from a real readers perspective
-Plot, pacing, and character analysis to boost engagement
-Comments on structure, flow, and chapter hooks
-Genre-specific insights for LitRPG stats, progression systems, and fantasy tropes
-A professional yet supportive critique to help you grow as a writer
Whether youre polishing chapters for Royal Road, Webnovel, Tapas, Kindle, or your personal site, Ill help you create a smooth reading experience that keeps readers turning pages.
Packages:
Basic: Beta read up to X words (quick overview)
Standard: Beta read with detailed feedback notes
Premium: Full in-depth critique, scene-by-scene breakdown, and improvement suggestions
Lets make your story shine!
Order now or send me a message if you would like a custom offer for longer works.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What exactly is beta reading?
Beta reading is a reader-focused review of your manuscript. Instead of fixing grammar or spelling, I provide constructive feedback on pacing, character development, plot consistency, and overall reader engagement.
Do you accept all genres?
Yes! I welcome all genres from fiction and fantasy to non-fiction, memoirs, and essays. If your project is very niche, feel free to send me a message first.
How is beta reading different from editing or proofreading?
Proofreading checks for grammar, spelling, and typos. Editing focuses on sentence structure and style. Beta reading is different, it gives you the reader’s perspective, highlighting story flow, clarity, and how your work connects with its audience.
Do you provide line-by-line corrections?
No. I focus on the big picture, story, flow, and reader impact. If you need grammar or copyediting, that should be ordered separately from a proofreading/editorial gig.
Will you keep my manuscript confidential?
Absolutely. Your work will remain 100% private. I will never share, publish, or disclose your manuscript.
Can you read sensitive or mature content?
Yes, as long as it does not violate Fiverr’s community standards. If you are unsure, please message me first.
What file formats do you accept?
I accept Word (.doc, .docx) and PDF files. If you have another format, please message me first.
Can I order multiple times for the same manuscript?
Yes. Many authors request multiple beta reads at different draft stages. This ensures your manuscript improves with every revision.
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once again another excellent review of the material. it will be extremely helpful as continue to move forward and will look forward to working with him again in the future.
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decent feedback and well enough for my purposes and the state of the documents upon which he had to work with.
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once again another excellent review of the material. it will be extremely helpful as continue to move forward and will look forward to working with him again in the future.
Up to $50
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United States
decent feedback and well enough for my purposes and the state of the documents upon which he had to work with.
Up to $50
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1 day
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