I will be your developmental book editor
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sophiemazzaro

United States
Simona just nails the important little moments, and the small details others would easily miss. I'm deeply impressed and always look forward to reading her...
anetalegiec

United Kingdom
It was a real pleasure working with Simona. She stepped in as my developmental editor and truly exceeded my expectations. I highly appreciate the time she spent...
freyastone

United States
Simona helped me so much with my book and gave exceptional feedback. She was incredibly fast and very professional. I truly respect and appreciate all her hard...
matthewkress

United States
Great working with Simona and hearing her feedback. I really liked the line edits that she provided and the writeup. I think it really will improve my draft...
sophiemazzaro

United States
When I first hopped on Fiverr to find an editor, I would have never thought in my wildest dreams to land someone with such a deep understanding of my project...
About this Gig
In publishing, first impressions matter a lot. Agents and readers decide within the first few chapters whether to continue reading. You have at most two chapters to capture their interest. Let's make them unforgettable.
I worked as an editor. My first manuscript was picked from the slush pile; my novels have been successfully published; I self-published crime fiction and worked as a journalist and the film industry; I recognize a good story when I see one. I will tell you how to increase your chances of getting published.
It is tough to know what your story's strengths and weaknesses are. It would help if you had somebody who would tell it to you straight, without breaking you down. I'd love to assess your work and offer ideas and concrete examples for optimizing your story. A structural edit focuses on various elements, from plot, structure, and characterization to language: macro and micro.
Good developmental editing will keep your target audience in mind and judge your work with professional industry standards.
This is not a proofreading gig. But we will get your manuscript as close to publishing as possible.
I recommend having your query looked at for optimal results.
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FAQ
Do you add proofreading?
Important Notes: This is not a proofreading gig but a deep dive into your story.
Do you offer help with query letters and query packages?
I provide comprehensive reviews of query letters as well as the complete query package. Additionally, I offer assistance in researching literary agents. Please feel free to contact me for further information.
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S sophiemazzaro
Repeat Client

United States
Simona just nails the important little moments, and the small details others would easily miss. I'm deeply impressed and always look forward to reading her reviews and feedback. She is a mastermind at what she does.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?A anetalegiec
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
It was a real pleasure working with Simona. She stepped in as my developmental editor and truly exceeded my expectations. I highly appreciate the time she spent leaving detailed inline comments and pointing out exactly what could be improved in my manuscript. Thanks to her sharp eye and constructive...
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?F freyastone

United States
Simona helped me so much with my book and gave exceptional feedback. She was incredibly fast and very professional. I truly respect and appreciate all her hard work!! I cannot wait to dive back into editing now and that's a first for me. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M matthewkress

United States
Great working with Simona and hearing her feedback. I really liked the line edits that she provided and the writeup. I think it really will improve my draft and I implemented almost every single one of her suggestions. She was really quick to reply and attentive to what I needed in my project.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?S sophiemazzaro
Repeat Client

United States
When I first hopped on Fiverr to find an editor, I would have never thought in my wildest dreams to land someone with such a deep understanding of my project (she knows it better than I do myself sometimes) - above and beyond doesn't even cover it, she is the literal lightbulb over my head and made me get it done. Thank you, Simona.
Up to $50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?
159 reviews for this Gig
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| (8) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
S sophiemazzaro
Repeat Client

United States
Simona just nails the important little moments, and the small details others would easily miss. I'm deeply impressed and always look forward to reading her reviews and feedback. She is a mastermind at what she does.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?A anetalegiec
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
It was a real pleasure working with Simona. She stepped in as my developmental editor and truly exceeded my expectations. I highly appreciate the time she spent leaving detailed inline comments and pointing out exactly what could be improved in my manuscript. Thanks to her sharp eye and constructive...
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
S 
Seller's Response
Helpful?F freyastone

United States
Simona helped me so much with my book and gave exceptional feedback. She was incredibly fast and very professional. I truly respect and appreciate all her hard work!! I cannot wait to dive back into editing now and that's a first for me. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M matthewkress

United States
Great working with Simona and hearing her feedback. I really liked the line edits that she provided and the writeup. I think it really will improve my draft and I implemented almost every single one of her suggestions. She was really quick to reply and attentive to what I needed in my project.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?S sophiemazzaro
Repeat Client

United States
When I first hopped on Fiverr to find an editor, I would have never thought in my wildest dreams to land someone with such a deep understanding of my project (she knows it better than I do myself sometimes) - above and beyond doesn't even cover it, she is the literal lightbulb over my head and made me get it done. Thank you, Simona.
Up to $50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?
