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I will beta read and give feedback and critique

5.0
5.0

Netherlands

I speak English, Dutch, Italian, French

1,000 orders completed

Gig Summary

I'm a published novelist and professional editor with a master's in Film Studies and credits at the Venice Film Festival, Warner Bros, and Village Roadshow. With over 900 completed projects, I've help...

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About this Gig

I'll evaluate your manuscript with compassion and honesty, delivering an eye-opening evaluation. I'm a published author, journalist, and reviewer.

I know the feeling of showing others your work. I get the frustration of getting stuck. I've been a novice. I got my foot in the door. I have published two literary novels and self-published crime fiction. I worked as a film/travel journalist and have reviewed crime fiction. I have a master's in film and have worked in the film industry; I recognize a good story when I see one.

I want to build your manuscript up and develop its strong points. You can count on me to clear the path for your creativity and success. 

I look at plot, characterization, tone, tension, dialogue, structure, chapter-length ( beginning and ending points), continuity, rhythm, and target audience. I will find inconsistencies. 

They picked my first manuscript out of the slushpile; I will give you tips on how to grab the editor's or readers' attention with your opening chapters. If you like, I can help you with your submission letter.

I love my fellow authors and am a voracious reader; it'll be my pleasure to work together. 

Genre:

Children’s books

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Literary fiction

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Mystery

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Romance

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Fantasy

Language:

Dutch

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English

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585 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
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    michaelj_920

    US

    United States

    5

    Simona was an excellent beta reader. Her feedback was thoughtful, detailed, and consistently useful. She paid close attention not only to plot and pacing, but also to character development, emotional continuity, worldbuilding, and small inconsistencies that could easily have gone unnoticed. What I appreciated...

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

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    mysteryoflovemb

    US

    United States

    5

    If you are fortunate enough to of found Simona, stop looking because you have located a rock star! Five star communication, excellent constructive feedback, is open to answering all your questions even when the job is completed. If I write another book, I will 100% return to ask her to read it!

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

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    chrisc194

    CA

    Canada

    5

    I sent Simona my draft convinced it was a mess. I'd rewritten it so many times I couldn't tell anymore. Her first move was to point out, gently but without hedging, that the struggle was in me, not the book. Then she spent ten pages proving it. ...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • F
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    fell_deeds

    US

    United States

    5

    Simona was able to break down my story to the smallest detail, thoughtfully dissecting the emotional nuances, character behavior, and deeper intentions I was trying to convey. Her feedback went far beyond surface-level critique—she offered insightful observations, specific examples, and outside references...

    $200-$400

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

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    shaunmalcolm

    US

    United States

    5

    I had a great experience working with this beta reader on my book. Their thoughtful feedback gave me a valuable reader’s perspective and helped me see opportunities to strengthen the manuscript. I appreciated the care and attention they put into reviewing my work. It’s reassuring to have someone take...

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

585 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(574)
(11)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • M

    michaelj_920

    US

    United States

    5

    Simona was an excellent beta reader. Her feedback was thoughtful, detailed, and consistently useful. She paid close attention not only to plot and pacing, but also to character development, emotional continuity, worldbuilding, and small inconsistencies that could easily have gone unnoticed. What I appreciated...

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    mysteryoflovemb

    US

    United States

    5

    If you are fortunate enough to of found Simona, stop looking because you have located a rock star! Five star communication, excellent constructive feedback, is open to answering all your questions even when the job is completed. If I write another book, I will 100% return to ask her to read it!

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
    image-docs

    chrisc194

    CA

    Canada

    5

    I sent Simona my draft convinced it was a mess. I'd rewritten it so many times I couldn't tell anymore. Her first move was to point out, gently but without hedging, that the struggle was in me, not the book. Then she spent ten pages proving it. ...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • F
    image-docs

    fell_deeds

    US

    United States

    5

    Simona was able to break down my story to the smallest detail, thoughtfully dissecting the emotional nuances, character behavior, and deeper intentions I was trying to convey. Her feedback went far beyond surface-level critique—she offered insightful observations, specific examples, and outside references...

    $200-$400

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    shaunmalcolm

    US

    United States

    5

    I had a great experience working with this beta reader on my book. Their thoughtful feedback gave me a valuable reader’s perspective and helped me see opportunities to strengthen the manuscript. I appreciated the care and attention they put into reviewing my work. It’s reassuring to have someone take...

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No