I will be your tough love constructive beta reader
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
I want to help you reach the next level.
Don't buy this gig if you only want to hear nice things about your work because I want to help you hit the heights of story telling.
I want you to be a better story teller.
Being a fast reader, typically I do a first read-through of any manuscript allowing me to get a real feel of the story. I then write my initial report while going through the manuscript a second time.
I don't pull any punches so be prepared for honesty. But if I see stuff I like, I don't hesitate to give a thumbs up. If you don't agree with my opinions, then that's fine, because it's your work.
What to expect:
1. A summary of my analysis of your book with both the strengths and weaknesses of your manuscript.
2. Feedback on areas such as plot, character development, POV, world building, pacing etc
3. 100% confidentiality.
4. Happy to answer as many questions as you want.
Getting a second, fresh set of eyes over your work can make such a difference. Despite how hard it can be to ask someone to critique your work, you will not regret working with me.
Language:
English
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FAQ
Do you read Erotica?
Yes
What genres do you read?
I'm heavy into fantasy and sci-fi, however, I also love thrillers, action adventures, erotica, romance so I'll pretty much read anything!!
Do you write yourself?
Yes. Under a couple of pen names I produce work on Amazon that sells consistently, but I can't retire for another couple of decades
Do you beta read non-fiction?
Yes. I will give you my feedback based on what I felt reading the book. I won't fact check unless you request that separately.
Do you only point out the bad?
Nope. If I love something I tell you I loved it, but more importantly why.
Do you do inline comments?
Check out my developmental editing gig if you would like inline comments as well as a full report and get the full experience.
180 reviews for this Gig
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T tomwheetley

United States
Steve, pointed out a few things missing in my story. Exactly what I was looking for. He is honest and does not sugarcoat. He gave clear examples and even provided comparisons to contemporary stories\movies. If you are looking to improve, Steve is the guy you need.
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C citizencandy

Hong Kong
Steve is always on point, with great advice about pacing and POV.
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?R ruthamilligan

United States
Steve finished my story in record time, giving me numerous tips on how to strengthen the novel. This is the reason I hired him again after my last book!
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?G 
gferrar

Belize
I'd say Steve's work was exceptional because he took on a big project on an unfamiliar and complex subject which he admitted he would not have chosen according to his own preferences. But he hung in there and followed the argument of the books well except where he admitted that I lost him due to too...
$100-$200
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C citizencandy

Hong Kong
Steve has a deep understanding of what makes a plot tick. It is always great working with him.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?
180 reviews for this Gig
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| (14) | ||
| (2) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (1) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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T tomwheetley

United States
Steve, pointed out a few things missing in my story. Exactly what I was looking for. He is honest and does not sugarcoat. He gave clear examples and even provided comparisons to contemporary stories\movies. If you are looking to improve, Steve is the guy you need.
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C citizencandy

Hong Kong
Steve is always on point, with great advice about pacing and POV.
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?R ruthamilligan

United States
Steve finished my story in record time, giving me numerous tips on how to strengthen the novel. This is the reason I hired him again after my last book!
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?G 
gferrar

Belize
I'd say Steve's work was exceptional because he took on a big project on an unfamiliar and complex subject which he admitted he would not have chosen according to his own preferences. But he hung in there and followed the argument of the books well except where he admitted that I lost him due to too...
$100-$200
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C citizencandy

Hong Kong
Steve has a deep understanding of what makes a plot tick. It is always great working with him.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?
