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I will beta read your scifi and thriller story and provide feedback
Crafting worlds one story at a time
Hi! I'm Akash, a passionate storyteller and freelance writer. As a student, I specialize in sci-fi, thrillers, and mythology, creating captivating stories with engaging plots and unforgettable charact...
About this Gig
Need honest, detailed feedback on your sci-fi, thriller, or screenplay?
You're in the right place. I am a passionate storyteller and screenwriter who understands the inner mechanics of gripping plots, impactful characters, and cinematic storytelling. If you're an indie author, filmmaker, or Wattpad writer looking to polish your draft before publishing or filming I am here to help.
What You'll Get:
A complete beta reader report tailored to your story
Feedback on:
- Plot structure & pacing
- Character arcs & consistency
- Dialogue realism
- Scene flow & emotional impact
- Suspense & twists (especially for thrillers)
Honest and respectful critique not sugar-coated, but always constructive
In-line comments (Standard & Premium packages)
Bonus suggestions (titles, loglines, structure fixes in Premium)
Genres I specialize in:
️ Sci-fi
️ Thrillers & suspense
️ Psychological drama
️ Screenplays (short films, series episodes, indie scripts)
Lets collaborate to make your story stronger, sharper, and unforgettable.
Feel free to message me before ordering Id love to hear about your story!
Genre:
History
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Mystery
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Science
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Science fiction
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What is beta reading, and how is it different from editing?
Beta reading focuses on the reader’s experience — I give feedback on plot flow, characters, pacing, and overall impact. It’s not copyediting or proofreading. I won’t correct grammar or spelling unless you’ve added it as an extra.
What file formats do you accept?
I prefer Word (.docx), PDF, or Google Docs. If it’s a screenplay, feel free to send Final Draft, Celtx, or PDF versions — I’ll adapt accordingly.
Do you offer in-line comments?
Yes! In-line comments are included in Standard and Premium packages, or as an add-on. They help you see exactly where certain scenes/dialogue need improvement.
I don’t write sci-fi or thrillers. Can I still order?
Absolutely! While I specialize in sci-fi, thrillers, and screenplays, I’m open to other genres (except extreme erotica or political hate content). Just message me first to confirm.
How do I know if your feedback style suits my story?
Great question! You can send me 500–1,000 words for a free sample critique (one-time for new clients) before placing an order. Let’s see if we click!
