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I will beta read your first chapter and give honest feedback
Publication Ready Book Design and Layout
Hi I'm Destiny, I’m a book formatting and design specialist with a strong eye for detail and a passion for clean, professional layouts. I help authors transform their manuscripts into publication-read...
About this Gig
Need a fresh pair of eyes on your story?
I'll beta read your story and give you honest, constructive feedback from a genuine reader's perspective.
I'll focus on:
The Hook | Does your opening grab me?
Characters | Who stands out and why?
Story | Is it clear and engaging?
️Pacing | Where did my interest rise or dip?
Reader Reaction | What questions or expectations did I have?
️Engagement | Would I want to keep reading?
CHOOSING YOUR PACKAGE
FIRST CHAPTER FEEDBACK 2,500 WORDS
A focused reaction to your opening and first impressions.
STORY FEEDBACK 5,000 WORDS
Detailed feedback on your characters, story, pacing, strengths, and areas that could be stronger.
STORY FEEDBACK + BRAINSTORMING 7,500 WORDS
In-depth feedback plus creative brainstorming for characters, plot directions, conflicts, twists, and more.
Please note: $0.012/per word! This gig focuses on beta reading and reader feedback, not proofreading, grammar correction, or line editing. This gig is for excerpts and shorter sections of your manuscript, not full-length novels. Each package has a set word limit so I can give your submission the attention it deserves.
Ready for a fresh perspective? Send me your story!
Genre:
Fanfiction
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Horror/ thriller
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Mystery
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Romance
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Fantasy
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What should I send you with my order?
Please send your story/chapter within your package's word limit, along with a brief description of your book and any specific questions you'd like me to consider.
What genres do you beta read?
I'm open to most fiction genres, including romance, fantasy, romantasy, mystery, and thriller. If you're unsure, feel free to message me first.
Do you proofread or edit my writing?
No. This gig focuses on reader feedback and creative brainstorming rather than proofreading, grammar correction, or line editing.
Can I send multiple chapters?
Absolutely! You can send one or multiple chapters as long as the total stays within your package's word limit.
What kind of feedback will I receive?
I'll share my genuine reader reaction, including thoughts on the hook, characters, pacing, story clarity, engagement, and what makes me want to keep reading.
Can you give me ideas for my story?
Yes! Creative brainstorming is included with the Premium package, where I'll explore possible character developments, conflicts, plot directions, twists, and other possibilities.
Do you read full novels?
No, this gig is specifically for shorter excerpts and sections of a manuscript. I don't currently offer full-novel beta reading, as I want to keep each order focused and provide thoughtful feedback within the package's word limit.
My word count doesn't fit any tier, what do I do?
Send me your word count of your excerpt and I'll calculate it! My pricing is $0.012 per word, if you'd instead like to calculate it yourself!
