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I will double beta read your manuscript with inline comments and reader reports
Strengthening Stories, Preserving Your Voice
I'm Clara, a fiction developmental editor and passionate reader who believes every great book begins with a manuscript that deserves thoughtful attention. Together with Ethan, I provide a unique dual ...
About this Gig
Wondering if your manuscript truly connects with readers? Are your characters memorable, your pacing engaging, and your plot compelling enough to keep readers turning the pages? Sometimes, all you need is honest feedback from fresh eyes before publishing.
Hi! We're Clara & Ethan, two avid readers and dedicated beta readers who independently review every manuscript to give you two genuine reader perspectives.
Our goal is to help you understand exactly how your story resonates with real readers while preserving your unique voice.
What you'll receive:
- Two independent beta reads
- Inline comments throughout your manuscript
- Two detailed reader reports
- Honest, thoughtful, and actionable feedback
- Insights on characters, plot, pacing, dialogue, worldbuilding, and overall reader experience
- Feedback tailored to your specific concerns
We enjoy reading Romance, Fantasy, Mystery, Thriller, Science Fiction, YA, Literary Fiction, Memoirs & Biographical Fiction, and more.
Your manuscript is treated with complete confidentiality, and we're happy to sign an NDA if requested.
Have questions or a manuscript outside our packages? Send us a message; we'd love to help you create the strongest version
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Will both of you read my manuscript?
Yes. Clara and Ethan read every manuscript independently. You'll receive two genuine perspectives, two detailed reader reports, and inline comments that reflect our individual reading experiences.
What kind of feedback will I receive?
You'll receive honest, constructive feedback on your plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, worldbuilding (where applicable), emotional impact, and overall reader experience, along with inline comments and two detailed reader reports.
Do you edit or proofread my manuscript?
No. This gig is for beta reading, not proofreading or copy editing. Our focus is on the reader's experience and helping you identify strengths, weak points, and areas that may need improvement.
Can you review manuscripts longer than your package limits?
Yes. If your manuscript exceeds the listed word count, send us a message. We'll be happy to create a custom offer based on your manuscript's length.
What genres do you read?
We enjoy reading Romance, Fantasy, Mystery, Thriller, Science Fiction, Young Adult, Literary Fiction, Historical Fiction, Memoir, and many other fiction genres. If you're unsure whether your manuscript is a good fit, feel free to message us before ordering.
Do you provide inline comments?
Yes. We leave thoughtful inline comments throughout your manuscript to share our real-time reactions, questions, and observations while reading.
Can I ask you to focus on specific areas?
Absolutely. If you'd like us to focus on specific aspects such as pacing, character development, dialogue, plot, romance, or worldbuilding, let us know when placing your order, and we'll tailor our feedback accordingly.
