I will be your developmental book editor, beta reader for your novel book

Hello, fellow storytellers!

I know how much time, heart, and effort goes into finishing a manuscript. Sharing it with someone else can feel a little scary, especially when you're not sure whether the story is really working.

That's where I come in.

I'm here to give you honest, thoughtful, and kind feedback, the kind I'd want someone to give me if I were sharing my own work. My goal isn't to tear your story apart, but to help you understand what's working, what may be holding it back, and where you can make it even stronger.

I'll look closely at things like:

• Character arcs and development
• Plot and structure
• Pacing and scene flow
• Plot holes and inconsistencies
• Dialogue
• Readability and narrative flow
• Plausibility and story logic
• Overall reader experience

You'll receive in-line comments throughout your manuscript as well as a detailed editorial report covering the story's strengths, areas that need attention, and practical suggestions for your next round of revisions.

Whether you're working on your first novel, polishing a finished draft, or simply wondering, Is this actually working? I'll read your manuscript with fresh eyes and give you feedback you can genuinely use.