I will provide an expert beta read and manuscript feedback for romantasy
About this Gig
Stop guessing if your story works and protect your legacy with an expert beta read that identifies plot holes and weak chemistry before your readers do.
Hi my name is Steve, I am a developmental specialist focused on storytelling mechanics. Through a rigorous beta read, I identify exactly why plot points feel unearned, ensuring your emotional stakes and world-building in romance fiction work in perfect harmony.
WHAT I OFFER
- Plot Hole Detection: Audit of timelines and magic.
- Manuscript Feedback: Macro-analysis of pacing.
- Trope Evaluation: Fresh romance fiction beats.
- Immersion Check: Fixing "info-dumps."
WHAT YOU GET: A comprehensive Beta Reading Report with suggested fixes and in-line manuscript feedback.
Get the professional beta read you need. Order now!
Language:
English
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French
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FAQ
Is my story safe with you?
Yes. Your intellectual property is 100% confidential. I never share your work, and all files are permanently deleted once your beta read is complete. Your story’s security is my priority.
Will your feedback be too mean?
No. I use "Kind Candor." I’ll be honest about plot holes and weak tension, but my manuscript feedback is always constructive. I’m here to help you improve your book, not tear it down.
What genres do you specialize in?
I am a specialist in romance fiction and fantasy (Romantasy). I understand the specific tropes readers expect, from "Enemies-to-Lovers" to complex magic system logic.
Do you fix the plot holes you find?
I don’t just point out what’s broken; I provide a roadmap to fix it. Every major issue identified in your beta reading report comes with suggested narrative solutions to keep your story airtight.
Is this the same as proofreading?
No. Proofreaders fix typos; I fix stories. I focus on the "big picture" pacing, character chemistry, and world-building—to ensure your manuscript is professional and market-ready.

