In TV, I worked on high-rating drama series, and with a host of writers, some famous, some unknown beginners; some were brilliant, others not so brilliant. My first paid-for writing was years ago; in ...
I read the following fiction genres: Thriller, Mystery, Crime, Action & Adventure, General Fiction, Romantic Suspense.
I'm not into: Paranormal, SF, Space, Dystopian, Fantasy, Romance, Childrens, YA.
Send me a Word doc of your book and I will provide:
A Commentary on the book's opening, its story structure, main and secondary characters and their motivation, plotting, plot-holes, tension and pacing, confusions, discrepancies and questions, dialogue, settings and description, writing (e.g. clarity and style) and an overview.
A Marked-Up version of your MS noting some of the above, where useful, and such typos, spelling or other errors which I notice. NB: I am not a text editor and cannot note all of these.