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I will review your query letter and improve your agent pitch

United States

I speak English

Beta Reader and Manuscript Feedback Specialist

Hi, I'm Summer! I hold a B.S. in English and Creative Writing and an M.A. in Creative Business Leadership from SCAD. I provide thoughtful beta reading and manuscript feedback for fiction and nonfictio...

About this Gig

Writing a great book is only half the challenge. A query letter needs to capture an agent's attention and persuade them to keep reading.

As a published poet with a B.S. in English & Creative Writing and an M.A. in Creative Business Leadership, I provide detailed query critiques that combine storytelling expertise with publishing market insight.

My feedback focuses on:

Hook, premise, and stakes
Query structure and clarity
Character and conflict presentation
Genre positioning and marketability
Agent appeal and reader engagement
Strengths, weaknesses, and revision opportunities

Whether you're preparing to query agents, revise your submission package, or strengthen your pitch, I'll provide honest, actionable feedback while helping you preserve your unique voice.