I will review and rewrite your sponsorship proposal

You have a proposal. It isn't closing. Usually the problem is that it talks about your organization for three pages before it says what the company gets. I've read sponsorship and partnership proposals from both sides, as a director-level fundraiser and as a B2B sales leader who closed $2.78M a year. I'll tell you exactly what a corporate reader skips and what makes them call back. What you get: - A marked-up review with every change explained - A priority list: the three fixes that matter most - On Standard and Premium, a full rewrite you can send as-is Premium also includes a version tailored to one company you name, with a cover email to the right decision-maker. Send your current proposal (up to 5 pages) and the companies you plan to approach, and I'll confirm the right package in one message.