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I will review your fiction book
About this Gig
I will read your children's book and give you clear, honest feedback on:
- Is the story engaging for kids?
- Is the language age-appropriate?
- Does it flow when read aloud?
- Where does it lose attention?
- What should be improved before publishing?
You will receive a detailed written report highlighting your story's strengths, weaknesses, and practical suggestions for improvement.
Who is this for?
- Writers unsure if their story is ready
- First-time authors
- Anyone before illustration or publishing
Important!
This is NOT line editing.
This is story-level feedback to help you improve before editing.
Language:
English
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Hebrew
Content Type:
Book
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Short story
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Is this editing?
No. This is feedback before editing.
Will you be honest?
Yes. Clear and constructive, not harsh.
What happens after this?
Most clients move to my editing gig to improve the story.
