I will review your childrens book
About this Gig
"Exceptional work! Would work with Tal again on practically any writing project with her level of expertise." (Michael, the author and creator of The Giving Heart).
"Tal is reliable, communicates clearly, and delivers high-quality work." (Adam, Language Innovation LLC).
I will read your children's book and give you clear, honest feedback on:
- Is the story engaging for kids?
- Is the language age-appropriate?
- Does it flow when read aloud?
- Where does it lose attention?
- What should be improved before publishing?
Who is this for?
- Writers unsure if their story is ready
- First-time authors
- Anyone before illustration or publishing
Important!
This is NOT line editing.
This is story-level feedback to help you improve before editing.
Language:
English
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Hebrew
Content Type:
Book
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Short story
Genre:
Children’s books
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Comic book
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Literary fiction
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Is this editing?
No. This is feedback before editing.
Will you be honest?
Yes. Clear and constructive, not harsh.
What happens after this?
Most clients move to my editing gig to improve the story.
