I will beta read spicy romance novel and give honest feedback on chemistry and pacing

United States

I speak English, Spanish, German, French

Professional Book Reader, Editor, Formatter and Cover Design

Hi, my name is Talyra. I'm a professional beta reader, editor, book cover designer & formatter with 3+ years of experience helping authors turn manuscripts into publish-ready books. I work across fict...
About this Gig

Have you lived with your characters for months, but its hard to know if the "spark" you feel is actually making it onto the page. There's nothing more stressful than hitting publish & wondering if readers will actually feel the chemistry or just get bored halfway through. As your romance beta reader, my job is to give you that "first reader" perspective before the reviews do.


When I read your work, I look for things that keep people turning pages. Whether it's a dark romance or a high-stakes romantasy, I check if the tension is tight & if the story pacing keeps the plot moving. I focus on ensuring your romance scenes feel earned & that your characters' connection feels real.


What you'll get:

I provide a detailed readers report that breaks down what worked and what didn't. You'll also get inline comments on your manuscript showing exactly where I laughed, where I blushed & where I got confused.


If you're a self-publishing author, you need a supportive & honest feedback. I will read perspective needed to fix "sagging middle" issues & sharpen your dialogue. I will tell you exactly what I felt, where I was hooked & where I got bored, for quick fix.


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Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Memoir/ biography

Language:

English

French

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